I made a new mop today.. Here's a few handstyles...

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crits??

 

Hey, i was just wonderin if i could get some crits and ways to improve this tag...

 

andro - dont like the an, cant read that bit, but there pretty sweet tags.
sarz - really nice, fix up the A and keep mucking around with flow and stufff...

 

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crits?

 

k, thanks, that helps alot
I'll be back tonight with some more stuff

 

i wouldnt make your s and p overlap.

 

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Sarz i actually don't like it try working on making your letters look more fluid. with that said, welcome and start givin' crits.

 

Bump...independent-Do some simples those tags have no flow.

 

dont take this the wrong way thrice, just dont tag with that... at all, look at handsytles and get ideas, but dont handwrite

 

handwrite??? Also im not tagging with that hence it being on paper. It's a simple, just looking for some crit for the flow. Thanks tho.

 

wat hes saying is it jus looks like u wrote in cursive....i c it too...

 

aren't you supposed to when starting out? i was told so.

 

noooo.
not at all.
simple letters, plenty flow.

 

bump bump bump.
just lose the crown, the rest is dopeee.
you jacked the guy smoking from enem eh?
ahahahah,
i have fucken trouble with philly styles.

 

How is this?

 

enem is dope as fuck but nah i didnt jack it...most philly styles throw in a face wit a bit of weed in the mouth but enems shit and axions deff has had an effect on me haha but thanx
edit* ***** im down to help out if dats wat u hintin at...i done showed maso a bit...tho i gota get back at him wit sum more but yo if dats wat u seek holla on the pms
edit again* thrice...***** u just got no flow in them letters...check sum old skool nyc flick for a hint of flow man iight? letters need to be closer its real sloppy quotes...its all beat man start again

 

ahahaa, kk.
im not from philly, i dont know much about their style.
i watched enems part in infamy though.
philly styles are fucken dopeee.
its rare to see em in montreal.

 

shit no wonder...its a de and phily thing...wickets, wickeds, tallhands...im from md but i rep De and De and philly styles go hand in hand philly just got em down little more packed...it all started n philly so u know they deff have the best/most complicated hands in the world..theirs summ crews jus dedicated to hands...its sick