This page actually looks dope so far. And props to mar and snap cus they have improved, congrats. Some new style im workin on, it kinda looks like the style i already have, but ive added to it. [Broken External Image]:http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/2703/02240ev0.jpg
View attachment 347621 new peice today. CRITS? azteka- im feelin the letters, but imo alittle overboard with the extensions but colour it first and prove meh wrong! snap- i love it man its tight. the A looks a bit funky though mar- your shits hot, im really diggin that fill. scream- fire bro..fire, i love the handy.
actually man...honestly...thats lookin pretty clean. the letters are crisp. your hands seemed to be nice and steady. the only thing i can think of is the t. that extension how it comes down almost makes it look like a p. but its definitely easy to know its a t. besides that, pretty clean man
Heres my bitch: The paper eats my ink like a sponge, ill make a fine liner version with a ruler, and add some more detail later, i sadly rushed to get color into it now it kinda looks like crap, ill redo it in a bit. [Broken External Image]:http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/7971/dsc00863we0.jpg <-color [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4863/dsc00859az9.jpg <-before task: im liking it, dont have much to say about it except keep up the good work. azteka: looks good, though ur 3d makes it look twisted in some spots snap: nice, only thing i wouldnt do is have the extension off the top part of the P scream & amaze : very hot dace: block out ur letters, make them look exactly like this font.
bump all that pogs, actually quite nice. work a lil on the g and o though. your progressin crazy fast
Task - shits dope as hell Plain and simple i'm debating doing a star fill in blue or bubbles or something in red. I need crits on letters i feel these a lot more than a lot of my shit. I know it needs something more though. New style I've been fucking with I have more pics of it I may post later.
bump for these dudes, some of the good stuff on the last coupla pages, yonk - i actually really like that, the y is niiice to, the only thing i would say is keep your flow consistent, knucks/ asen / sledgehammer watever the fuck you are nowadays, shits fresh man, i dunno why but that spikey style gives me a tingle pogs - its fresh but on the second one i dont like your s as much, illen g tho, keep it up man kfc - shut the fuck up and go sketch, knucks said it best, shits pathetic ill maybe have sumin later
jin u need to make it cleaner and check out the new to graffiti thread those tips will help you out i like the green one tho pretty cool something i jus did tonight...i saw the j a while ago in a video so its got a similar style to someone i dont remember who but its still all mine mostly...im trying to get away from that JA style cuz my stuff before was lookin too similar View attachment 347646
Yeah The green is something that I have never realyl seen anything like before. I feel like your f doesn't flow with the rest man.
ahah shit i just realized it looks like an f tru.. its supposed to be a y tomorow nights pic that will be first change.
THE REAL FABLE!!!lol Crits View attachment 347661 Riot-good shit but i was feelin the SWORE peice u did more DACE-good shit lookin better JF-nice simple
j-f - lol i thought it was an F too, just fix that james - the D looks like a question mark and the A looks like a banana peel. just take the extension off the D, give the A straight legs and take the extension off the C. the E is pretty good, keep with that. riot - the middle bar of the A is fat and the middle of the B is skinny, just keep working on using same width bars fable - straighten the lines up, they're too flimsy? keep at it though
Pogs: im liking all that shit this was a speed sketch, 5 minutes and its sketchy as fuck I know shits wrong with it cause like i said it was for speed
Rank- n and k are fresh. A is too covered and the top left of the right needs to be sorted. But you have a killer dub on the way.