darkeist you need to stfu right away. pogs's letter structure is 110% on point. and task's simple is fire. only thing hurting it is the karak in it. ps. your throwie's suck. get some good d's and m's
Scream: I always like your colors. Task: Pink is a bold choice, but I like it other than the middle of the F for some reason Any help? [Broken External Image]:http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/9859/dsc0410rr2.jpg
yo ESKIMO- dude i like the E and the S but after that the letters become iffy. and your C looks kinda like an E the way you bend it in like that. watch your self son
pogs - rad G and S. the P and O seem a little small though task - lol at the moon, good shit though light - the K looks like a H, i like the E View attachment 347861 i know the shits looking the same, but there are some changes
grape ka. [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5264/graperoozw6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/396/grapexqh2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/396/grapexqh2.e317b69bf4.jpg various fuckery. sex without condoms - always dug your style dude. keep doin' your stuff. what a disaster - needs some work dude, id suggest sticking with a str8 letter, and if that is your straight letter start even simpler. but your getting it. taskone - looking nice dude. nice fill and spunk. the only thing id say is clean it up a bit and your there. darkiest - the letters are looking sorta played out as far as style. play with some simpler buble letters or somthing, too generic. peace.
grape play with that piece on the 2nd page, that style could go places, first start by removing the crowns and making the edges pointier instead of as curved
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damn grape! i agree wit sex. i mean now, its sexy as hell minus the crown &/ the halo. lookin nice. i think im just retarded or somethin, but what do you write? KSME? the K is somewhat better, but it almost looks like an r. dont curve it inwards i think. but thats just me. i dont know shit
reeeaaaally gettin sick of every fucking Crit being.. "work on structure" of "simpler" half of the stuff here cant get any more simpler then it is without it being block letters or some wack ass straight letters. 1.start with blocks 2.Add your OWN style to the letters 3.dont add so much that its lame. (rant) im sick of seeing all the same CLONED graffiti with the same style. take a walk back to when graf started, look at pics. Everyone had a different style. now everyone has the same lame ass letter style and thowie letters just because of kids like the ones in these forumz making kids switch up their styles. the graf scene is getting worse then the media & government. ask for help, everyone needs it when you start out... just dont change how you make your shit. FUCK, think for your self. whatadizaster!- fresh, i like it.
everthing looked the same back then, there are so many more different styles now then there were. you have a valid point, but this early in the game, its not going to make or break their style. see each of these kids in 5 years, you wont be saying the same thing.
im not sayint THESE kids have the same style. this is where style developes. im talking about the kids who are "good", its not all about the extensions and that. everyone is TRYING to do the same stuff. graffiti is about going outside with paint and getting your name up, i think the internet is ruining Graffiti. sry this isn't a pm, but i think its good to let kids know wuts up. there are more styles now, but they're getting a little out of hand.
then why the fuck are you posting this in the TOY section... go up to the graff flixs, everyone has their own unique style, your just trippin.
your not alone View attachment 347870 i think the people who are gonna become a good writer wouldnt pay too much attention to the internet. their choice edit...what the kid above me said too
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