Thanks man. I like the fact the emo is about to kill himself.

 

great job, i just dont think your should right camer....for obvious reasons

 

New throw, its a rough sketch.
Crits/ suggestions?
Fatso- i like it... a lot..

 

Fatso- Nice stuff
Chump- make it flow some a little more
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xyk is right man the style is nice as fuck fatso

 

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skiv- shit son do bars, dont try to make it look like graffiti, just rock simples, you realy cant go wrong with a proper simple.

chump- look at other throwies. dont bite, but go off them. also, simple throws are dope, and c and h are good letters for that. try like, taller and less fat letters, without points.

fatso- feeeeelin it.

 

i didn't bite. I don't really like tall throws, but ill try some others stuff.
lol I Like points.

 

i didnt mean you did bite, i mean when you go to look at other throws, dont bite them. ya dig?

 

camer try some 3d, cuz now your peice look too plain, atleast do a dropshadow to it or somtin.

 

yea...
well ill work on the one i have... then post again...

 

word.
its so bland.
like add something to make it look atleast an incey bit original.

over the past few pages there have been " dopes " " ills " given out to the wackest of people...dont lick arses if someone says they like YOUR peice..it aint helping anyone

Sex..Over..now thats ill..

and the collab is named nothing..because none of the writers involved are toy..

 

character

 

bars man bars

 

i use bars..im just not that good at them, or i take it a little to far.
spent a little more time on this one.
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that one is definatly better, you just need to even out your bars, dont worry about extensions yet. all of the bars on the top of the s are nice and even but the bottom they are different widths, same as the other letters. i know you dont want to hear it but stay simple, trust me it will help

 

chek ur Pm's

 

puleease im straight wack
call it '' that toy sketch and his tallented friends''

 

bump

 

hey guys

Ayte..looking good man..you gots good flowing...maybe fix the straight bar on the T yah know...make it so its one straight flowin bar

skiv..hey guess what...you do simples..to get good at bars...your not good at bars...s use your brain and work out what you need to do

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and a lil off topic but im so happy about this..

i did the greatest shot EVER on Call Of Duty 4 erlier..it was like...the whole map...i got positioned in a great sniper spot....looked down my scope...see a bitch like the whole map length away from me...took a deep breath...WHAAAMMMMMMMMM 3 second bullet travel time to hit him right in the fucking head that bitches blood flew 4 feet backwards onto the wall behind him oh yeah

hehe peace guys !