simple ideas, I'm really having trouble with feelin out the V flow

I'll crit on the next page of flics

 

http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz0gs2.jpg
i can't get it to work right so this is the best i can do.

 

Try not doing cursive, Woozie

 

ya i know but i struggle with handstyles. techanuck i like the top 3.

 

Just Drew this today in art class with Deco's

 

Yo thanks mate for helping me out. But i think i got a D and one that flows. But im not gonna post until its gotten better

 

"Jerm"

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dont like how the r and the e are connecting..

 

in which one (top or bottom?)

 

both.
dislike the top one more.

 

i've been using the bottom one more lately. any suggestions..?

 

try and add some flow to your letters.
check out the "new to graff thread"
helps allot of people out.
it'll give you somewhere to start.

 

engine try to make the letters all the same size
im bad like that with my o's but im getting better...
just like if u need help or something try it on lined paper

 

Wrong thread.....

 

crits?

 

Pick a favorite 1-5

I like 1 the best myself

Any changes you would make too?

 

New tag...crits?

 

change your name kiddo.

 

again..fuck.