DOAP shit is looking clean and damn hence thats the closest bite i ever seen switch it up a bit n ull be good [Broken External Image]:http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2408/000b04101iw8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2408/000b04101iw8.jpg
close jetpack hes called muffin top haze u should make ur l and t bend in the same direction as the c,e and r for the flow
the fuck outta here with that cumon guys bullshit, u didnt crit anyone on the page and expect us to crit u
Soooorry. duct tape, your A is fantastic sketch, I like the contrast on your muffin guy. haz-e, sick, but i'd like it more if it was even on the bottom
Cyto, love the outline and the exclamation point, but the bump on the bottom of the s seems kinda out of place
View attachment 356187 First attempt at a one-liner. Haze make the L bend the same way as the other letters.keep working on the letters aswell cuz that style looks nice.
yo elect thers is to much space betwwen the l and the emake the l bend forward other than that its a pretty sliod piece and i dont really like the right side of ur t somthing just seems off
Damn bro, I said I used his style to do my name. I never claimed it as mine, and never said I'd paint it. I was bored and fucking around. As for you, fix up the L so there's not such a big gap, and the top bar on the T. That's fucked. Drakula, that one liner is fresh.
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could have used more time and effort but it's on scraps so w/e Chump- I like the start, i really feel like that could turn into something with more uniform style to the letters like the AB are nice but the K and S could be more similar. Haz-E- Work the lean on the L and maybe a straighter T with the same angle on the extension would be nice. Drakula- nice work, though the A kinda get's lost without more definition Smooth- feelin all three, the progression one is a tight concept, and the fill on the first seems like a good direction to try/