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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    nice stuff Gesus.
    you got it with some vocals on it ?
     
  2. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    lol thats the best ya got kroc the cock??
    you know what happens to kids who pulls toy guns?
    they get shot, they get tought, on sum Yo hot ta trot ta Rot type plot
    other words, left fo dead, check what i said and maybe input that information into your head be4 trying to be a big dawg pullin fake lead...


    an naw said... i dont spit on mics... its forbidden....
     
  3. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    umm my rhyme wasnt toward anyone but i wasnt just sum random stuff tht came to my head and i like your raps there pretty hot
     
  4. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    okay, prolly gonna call me a toy n shit, and this prolly isnt the thread to be talking in, but i just listened to you beat gesus, and thats dope, so what do you do it on...like is it legit turntables? or a computer program, or like...keyboards? i have no clue about this stuf,f but sounds dope, and i would like to check it out atleast...
     
  5. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    no i was thinking like maybe someone bought it off you and rapped over it?
     
  6. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    Droppin lines like dimes but don't confuse me with a snitch
    I'll leave your ego full of holes, verbal blows makin you twitch
    Yes they call me unconscious cuz I'll leave you wrecked and nausious
    One look into my eyes, surprised, drop dead, so be cautious
    Watch what you say and don't you dare speak my name
    My vocals destroy plain clothed hoes turned into dames
    I'll preach verbal saudomy, rippin into the cerebellum, verbal lobotomy
    I'm 17 with a baby face, crazy pace, speeding, can't pass this prodigy
    Can't follow me, I'm on a whole nother level
    I'm the 4th deminsion, always first, second guess, you'll have to settle
    Peddle fast, on thin glass, one mistake and break, crash
    Hurtling down, bottomless pits, your wits split and smash
    Knowledge has been abbolished and your time is up
    Your left to internet schemes such as 2girls1cup
    You see I stay in the cypher spittin flows and throwin bows
    You reside at pied piper's, tutin flutes, not wearin clothes
    You gayer than elton john and yet you somehow claim to be straight?
    The only time you ate pussy: your kat-woman themed birthday cake
    I'm done for the moment cuz my mind is gettin cloudy
    I'll drop like jagerbombs next time I'm feelin roudy
    So long and fare well, I'll be back in a flash
    Next time I'll blow like St. Helens leavin competition covered in ash

    Lol weak shit but its all good. I'm feelin hung over =\
    JAGERBOMBS!
    JAGERBOMBS!
    JAGERBOMBS!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4JMOh-cul6M
     
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  7. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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    real quick....
    Everything I spit is straight fire
    Delawares most wanted
    First states vandal squads only desire
    Illest bomber on the block take a look around ull catch my name
    I eject a tag faster nd burning through an aks C mag
    Moving faster n the speed of sound
    I got mad beef wit crs nd sud
    Not one can paint,they all just clown
    im up son
    Hallows to Dusty fills
    Anxious, Over worked , underdosed
    Im a have to pass it off to my man gesus
    He knows wats up
    Blew out his knees , but this *****s still on sum real ill steez
    Mackin the hoes left n right
    Hes floridas vicious creature of the night
    Throwin up them mean 666 jawns
    Graffiti idnt checkers, it’s a game of chess
    wiping the board of toys like expandable pawns
    like they say there must b darkness before a new dawn….
    ( throw up sumthing ges, nd ill come up wit a longer verse next)
     
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  8. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Aight im gunna cheat a lil. This aint right off the brain but it was the other day. I wrote it all down as i thought of it Lemme know whatcha think


    Gas masked patrons
    painting with no aprons
    They have a name
    and you know they were there.
    but you'll never know it,
    no matter how much you care.
    and that you will
    cause they were bombing
    just not your home or a hill.
    Some claim them artists
    Some claim them felons
    Genius in their Melons,
    No water
    Just clean wall slaughter
    paint with a message
    display your purpose
    get up and get out
    Show em all youve got clout with out a doubt
    Caps in their pockets
    armed with art not rockets
    to fill you minds through eye sockets
    no criminals just revolutions
    they have solutions
    but you only see pollution
    your government only dilution
    Their words speak volumes
    But never in a book
    Less its a picture someone took
    cause you mistook
    their plan to rep their land.
    art destroyed by sand.
    take pride in you city, cause i know they do.
    Born and Raised
    but seeing it torn makes them crazed
    So their opinion comes out in sprays
    Usually at night but some during days
    And when it comes to this, they'll all say crime pays
    They say speech is free,
    But not if you ask me.
    They'de say the same,
    But you'd be to quick to point blame
    So in the shadows their genius will remain
    All because of your disdain


    Artists with a plan of attack
    and a message to which you cant fight back
    Conquer when days goes black
    they've no need to strap flack
    cause no one will spray back
    paint, no bullets
    Beanies, no mullets
    urban exploration
    they claim whats uncharted
    no backstabbing, rarely cold hearted
    gauranteed to have no piece from when they started
    only proof in pictures and memories
    Ink, markers, and chemistry
    make their own
    just to pick a bone
    say what they want
    with a faceless name
    all for the love of unknown FAME.
     
  9. When I rhyme I escalate above y'all others, so call me impervious
    You can't stop reading this rhyme, my next line keeps you curious
    When I post you can't resist from seein' what Hidden Tek said
    Rhymes iller then Jack The Ripper, Lyrical slaughter leavin' ya dead
    I'm not the illest emcee and you know I don't pack a nine millimeter
    All you other kids on here "rappin'" I know y'all don't neither
    I gotta bounce soon so I'm a cut to the chase, keep ya briefly
    Ya rhymes don't mean shit to anyone give up ya can't reach me
    Anything ya type it lacks structure and flow you're not in ya niche
    This isn't mainstream bullshit, ya on a computer, not with ya clique
    And we all know you don't got paper, you don't flaunt the brick
    For all any of us know, ya on ya knees puffin' up on that dick

    I'll do one later, just a a min or so to throw some shit down...Gesus I see ya homie
     
  10. mr.housearrest

    mr.housearrest Senior Member

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    ***** stop talkin, you wastin your time ,hit u with this clip and erase your mind,cuz im known to come up from behind mine,hitcha from yah blindside leave yah body up on the clothes line bitch,comin from the slums i aint never been rich,and if a pussy try to rob me thats why i be clutchin the duece fifth,so approach me if u think u a G and ima let my *****s slice u up for a stack or a key,it dont matter to me,you can get it how you wanna,big crates full of dat stank marijuana,ya digg....and i fucked up so thats all i could think of but yah
     
  11. ODonthesetrees

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    Damn, i just freestyled liek 4 different verses, deleted them all, need some sensi to make my lines crawl
     
  12. mr.housearrest

    mr.housearrest Senior Member

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    uhh o another 1,...listen its either shoot or get shot,ill blow up yah spot,yall aint about that savage shit you just be talkin alot,but me,i be walkin the spot ,gun cocked and im ready for the chips and i dont give a fuck who u dealin with,so please test,bust the glok and tattoo up yah chest,nah no hostages sry im killin tha rest,i think i rested my case ,leave these *****s alone,nah ill shoot up yah home,spitin straight off of the dome cuh...
     
  13. Hidden Tek is sicker than the average savage
    Lyrical homicide puttin' y'all wannabe rappers I ravage
    I don't give a fuck you got more kicks then Jet Li
    Or more chains then a Runaway Slave on flee
    You see it's straight poetics, ya gotta be lyrical
    A cunning rhyming miracle
    My words have spirit, you word these words to hear it
    Set me off these words make you fear it
    I don't got cash, fuck it I'm bankin' on the lottery
    I only settle for quality, so my raps are never watery
    I try to give it my all but these words are only part of me
    Intricate, you gotta read the signs in between these lines
    I'm deep in the hole, three felonies I got mad fines
    Destruction to Public property is part of my crimes
    Life didn't give me lemons it handed me bad limes
    So I'm a take what I got and go full force
    You can't hurt my pride, I'm a stay full on course
    My life experiences is my rhymes main source
    I'm seein' clear now ya boy is headed straight north
    I work with what I got a pen & a pad
    Dream of being able to work in the real "lab"
    My saliva must be liquid fire, the booth is a sauna
    I do my best not to fuck with the beef shit it's just drama
    "ayo hidden tek why do you keep callin' me out?"
    Bitch your shit is fake and whack, you impostor rap this isn't what I'm about
    I only got beef with those fake whack emcees
    Who claim they drivin mad whips or they're movin mad keys
    Bitch you must be delusional you smokin' mad trees?
    Ya transsexual bitch is the only one who's got them D's
    ya ya ya dig??
    Ch-Ch-Check the Technique....Whaaaaaaaaaaat!!?!!
     
  14. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    shits underground like ninja turtles,
    cant dodge the things i hurtles,
    if i bring in work tools
    ull be left infertile,
    like u battled the shredder,
    ill fucking behead ya,
    u get sliced like chedder,
    cheeses, i dont spit lyrics i spread disease,
    breddah please,
    u better flee,
    befor i make it hard to get a breeze,
    in ur windpipe,
    over things like
    u taliking to me without an invite
    and im not the bling type,
    but ull get robbed if ur rings hype,
     
  15. mr.housearrest

    mr.housearrest Senior Member

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    hidden tek ,ya big words dont impress me ,if ya gotta problem ***** u should come address me,got a S where my chest be ,i do wat i say,so all this fake whack imposter shit u be talkin bout is gay,speakin of transexuals i herd u gotta hidden dick, who this faggot playin with,ill leave ya dead with ya dick in yah mouf and call you dick head, wen i pulled the shotty out best believe the bitch fled,,yahh this dumb ***** fucked up and stepped on the third rail,left his body lookin frail as i went to the next deal,never snitch ,never squail,stack the money for bail,pussy *****s like you get punked in your own cell ,so u choose to tell ,thinkin like might as well ,yah you a bitch ***** ,and im like "cant ya tell?",...wen i go hard on tha mic i shine like lipgloss,you pist off cause ya dick small so the condom slip off,..but me?,i dip off with my dick hard with your mom while i enter her frieght yard and spray off on her walls,..so let me ask you something,.do you feel lucky?if ya open yah mouth again youll get abduct in a truck B,trust me .ill knock u off like an abortion ,all that bullshit u be sayin is just a proportion, using extra force to kill you of course,hang your fuckin corpse on your own front door ,with a easter basket to match ,and that about sums shit up, next time try not to swallow the whole dick or youll hickup ..yayaya gay ass *****
     
  16. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    If your talkin to me, then say my mother fuckin name
    Don't resist the urge to purge, vomit words from your brain
    Get slain like midieval knights when facing this dragon
    Or raided by hostile natives, I'm seizing your covered wagons
    Arrow heads embedded in the flesh of the narrow minded
    Your blinded, trapt in headlights, see death and cant rewind it
    Find it, Hip-Hop, something intangible, a state of mind
    Research it, learn the history, who killed it in its prime
    Solve the mistery, was it 50, T.I., Luda, or T-Pain?
    Was it Mike Jones, Nelly, or Wayne makin it Rain?
    Was it the tool Ja Rule and The Franchize Boys?
    Was it the down south dance and the rest of that noise?
    Whos to respect these hustlers, thats what they are
    They'd sell their soul for riches, only sing for the bar
    Only make music for the clubs they don't care about the people
    They only care about selling records, every one is but a sequal
    The same bullshit, can we hear some diversity?
    Can we hear some true struggles, take off the muzzles and quit jerkin me
    Your pullin my chain with all these weak rhyme sayers
    We need to bring back the real emcees, no thugs and no players
    Only speakers of the truth, the poetic disciples
    Mos Def, Talib Kweli, J-5, something delightful
    Common, Pharoahe Monche, The Roots, Immortal Tech
    De La Soul, Living Legends, and A Tribe Called Quest
    These are real emcess but just to name a few
    Search the underground and find great music to pursue
    Get off the mainstreams nuts cuz their music aint worth your time
    Look for something thought provoking, inspiring, no more crimes
    No more thug nation this, no more drug nation that
    No more wasting money at clubs, that shit is all whack
    If you really want to make somethin of your self, go to school
    Don't worry about material things and trying to look cool
    Be yourself, nobody else, and follow the righteous path
    Put your trust in god and get schooled in your behalf
    And pass the torch along into the hands of your seeds
    Give them a few wise words and watch as they exceed
    Through life, show em whats right, whats wrong and where to go
    When to look for help and when to try it on their own, watch em grow
    Bestow the gift of God and the gift of Hip-Hop
    Bestow the gift of knowledge and lift to tip-tops

    Meh, I'm too faded to continue. Half of this shit prolly doesn't even make sense. Goin to bed :eek: Hell tired
     
  17. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    i sees ya captin, im comin to ya packin a head full of acid
    im talkin in real life an litterly my minds fucked into oblivary
    drop dead spun but still spitting to shittilly
    not dope shit more like hiphopocritey,
    making up words to dispurse lack of cruse fillers in muh headery...

    fuck this i cant freesytle on acid i start picking apart the letters then new its all over... maybe when im sober tomarrow
     
  18. JEDI-MASTER

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    its all good homie, ill wait for u to finish nd ill actully think of sumthing instead of jus going off the head
     
  19. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    i know how to get down , know how to bite
    bark very little but i know how to FIGHT
     
  20. "Riot"

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    Been through thick and thin,to let you know im down to do it again.
    here till the end,beggin to be your friend.
    message didnt send,so i repeatedly press resend.
    i know you dont care,but i just want to be there.
    so look me in the eye,to let you know im down to die.
    you want me gone? want me to end up just like john?
    i got this gun at my chin,askin where have you been?
    try to drop the hint,but still try to blend in.
    whats the good in that,want me to drop some facts?
    you know that i love you,dont think i deserve to be above you.
    you made a mistake and im ready to retake.
    this quiz of trust,call it a joke if you must.
    but listen deep down,i want these words to take you town.
    i want you to realize,let you know what it feels like.
    to be broken,misspoken,and its all in one motion.
    slick,smooth, like handlotion.
    fuck that,its rough as sandpaper,and in 20 minutes you like "later!"
    i only wanted you for you,now i feel missused.