Yeah I know, I'm a graphic designer first and an artist second, I've been practicing on paper and I'll post one when I'm satisfied

 

im a graqphic designer too.. but yea a lil feedback... i know its plain and needs style but shit so do I...
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evol- I like it, try some extensions or some dif style letters, but it's nice now...DRIPS maybe?

 

and urs says VOIS right?? i think you should connect the V and the O sumhow but i like the S

 

bumity bump
vois:It looks good overall but i thing u need to add sumthing to the botom of the S
Evol :like tech said maybe add a lil extention on the L
Can i get some more crits on it??

 

drop the crown drop the crown drop the crown drop the crown drop the crown. kthnxbye

vois, i like the flow on the second one, but you should find something else to dot your I with imo, i dont like th emini-S on it, and bring up the left leg of the V, see if it looks good.

 

bumpity-bum-bump screwed up the shadow on the far left. (my sincere apologies for double posting.)

 

not feeling it, got a weird mountain thing going on, also try not to connect each letter the same way.

 

haha word, i call it the rockys. but yeah, ill work on a seperate letter steeze, i was gonna do that, but havent gotten around to it yet

 

^^ NEEDS VVork

 

i like it lose the 1 and fix the a up a bit.

 

Sorry, but that's not my name. Just messing around with Jetpack's name.

Thanks for the advice though, Edward.

 

Bump got no crits

 

i like it alot soboe!

 

thank you atleast someone gives me crits lol

 

BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP ill son that shyt aint toy

 

second that! that's not very toy.