thats why were here. we'll all be in the big boy forum one day... except people that dont crit others and want crits back. cuz you know, i havent been buggin out over that tonight. (e-sarcasim) peor! thank you for the crit, although it was more of a compliment i guess. but yeah, youve got a decent concept on bars, theres just a couple of distortions with the size towards the bottom where it gets bigger than the top, i would make the legs of your P and R a bit straighter so it would flow more. and i would make the bottom of your O not as pointyishish, kinna smoothen it out if ya know what im sayin
they get bigger at the bottoms on purpose. its called style honestly for what you did there wasnt really any crits I could give you other than keep at it
yeah i was pretty sure you did it on purpose, but i wrote it down anyways in case you didnt. you know, lookin out for ya or something else that sounds motivational. haha im gonna try an think of some fresh extensions tonight, cuz i dont really wanna put any on unless there somewhat original. for now, its my bomb, been paintin it too, it looks good, but i aint hittin the streets till A) its warmer B) i have absolutely no drips, im still drippin when i paint with krylin cuz i know im gonna be bombing with krylon more often than mtn C)i get faster at doin it
New stuff.. A battle piece against someone(and if you guys think I was at all biting Atlok, sorry, I just like the 3d ways...and was trying it out). Piece.. Some Slaps Crits? Evade-NIIIICCCEEE, love the style, and all the weird anti-gravity drip effect thing, cool fading too, love it. Kraft-Ok, but work on the 3D Jetpack-pretty cool, but if you do the bolt effect, it looks cooler with some kind of shimmer or light of it, make it steel looking maybe? Ed"Sezer"-Nice and almost like scrawl looking, pretty cool, especially with the color splash RFI-NICE, but the upside crosses have been overdone, if you refrain from that, I'd say almost perfect.
word capo, good call, i colored it green then thought, "hey, i wanna add some bolts" if i had thought it out better it probably would have looked better, just gettin my letters down y'digg the first piece, you may wanna bring out the K a bit more, the R is covering too much of the backbone. and i would take off those flat bars on the ends of the K. your second piece is better imo, but the P and the O should be straight like the C and the A, it kills the flow heavy. and iunno about those highlights, it should go with a 3d more, id try putting the highlights on the bottom of the letters runnin a bit up the right side, not all the way PS i cant see your slaps
ok like i said first in 13 months.. could be worse i guess TAMK - good that ur on simples, would focus too much on fills etc for now bud, try develop ur letters, since i see you got proportion down n shit. PEVR - reli like that stylee, always have, tried funkin it up more?? CAPO, id say work more on simples really, no need for mad fills n 3d for now.. that all just what i think.. uz asked for crits right??
View attachment 356827 Crayon style! Capo-Keep working Peor or Peur? Fix that 3rd letter Dim, the leg of the R is coming out of the wrong place Ros- Simples are nice Nemz-Mindgem misses you
Yeah the Capo wasn't originally ment to be straight at the CA, but It turned out that way by accident, it's supposed to all be jumbled. And the Ark piece, I really don't like except the 3d And do you see the Slaps now?(Do you mean the images are too small, or the image isn't showing up? NEM-yup I asked, thanks.
nemz-wow. i was wrong... looks amazing with color bro, keep it up, and i loooove the throwwwwww capo-simples... funerals-nice and simple, looks purty nice dim-you know i like your work, but the add-ons look waaaay to jam packed. the arrow on the left is to much. roa-keep the simples, on the first one make the bars more consistent. sake-i dont know anything about throws or i would crit. kraft-dont make the o pointy at the bottom. tamk-try to move your marker faster, it bled the ink to much, but the simples are nice evasion- judging by your name its supposed to be eva? but it looks like eua, the colors are nice but the letters are inconsistent. pie-the letters look tasty maybe an exchange when i get better? REMOVED THE ADD-ON. View attachment 356828 CRIT?
Yeah I completely failed on the ARK one, but on the CAPO one, isn't it fairly the right thickness? Also I always wonder why you guys tell us this, since most advanced graffiti all the bars and lines, etc are all different widths?
nemz thats nice capo i like the second one sept the bugger on it and the first ones 3d needs some work Lock try makeing all letters same size and keep practicing on your tag
ante, that looks so much better without that thing on it. gimmie an e-pound for that. lock, stop doing what your doing with your L, dont make the bottom bar go out that far cuz then you have too much dead space above it. fix your K, keep the backbone straight. an dont put the letters are side by side in every aspect like how your doing. tare, your A and R are kinna small compared to your T and E, make them wider. and i dont like your R whatsoever, that line you put halfway through the backbone of your R dosent look good, and for the leg of your R keep it going straight down, the hook up into the E kinna looks wack one