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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    nah i havent seen that until u just now showed me. Thats just straight philly style, im squeezing mine down alot more. Like i said, kinda in that pic i posted.
     
  2. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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  3. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    give em to get em..
    but im feeling nice today.
    work on your structure.
     
  4. Jihad

    Jihad Senior Member

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    ai30.tinypic.com_ayvy44.jpg



    Bumping my shit because i didnt get any crits.
     
  5. H3TT1NG3R

    H3TT1NG3R Elite Member

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    id lose the pentagon unless you worship satan. and its mad faded
     
  6. Jihad

    Jihad Senior Member

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    its black shoe dye. it was during the day and my camera phone fucked it all up but its black.
     
  7. H3TT1NG3R

    H3TT1NG3R Elite Member

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    o alright. i cant really tell what it says tho
     
  8. -Ark-

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    Jihad - Decent, but lose the pentagram for sure. Also work on makin' the letters a bit clearer.

    I've been workin' a bit on my handstyle since it's been gettin' warmer out. Is it good enough for me to start hittin the streets yet?
     

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  9. H3TT1NG3R

    H3TT1NG3R Elite Member

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    ^def. mad good and simple
     
  10. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    make all letters same size.
     
  11. -Ark-

    -Ark- Member

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    Thanks H3TT1NG3R and MUSE. Any big flaws other than that, Muse?
     
  12. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    thanks, i dont really want to give crits till i really know what im doing.

    any more crits?
     
  13. MUSEone

    MUSEone Elite Member

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    I think another kid on the site writes ark. But thats it. O well.
     
  14. Engine.357

    Engine.357 Senior Member

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    You guys kept saying to do my Tags on paper so I did a big one in Graphic Design Class today (Hence the background). Credit for the clouds goes to Blockhead, got the idea from his handstyles, so please don't call it a bite.

    ai183.photobucket.com_albums_x182_christian_tg_scribepic.gif
     
  15. [phenom5]

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    Ark I'd say squeeze the letters closer a little bit more...it just seems like there's a little bit too much space between the A and R. Other than that looks alright.

    Engine blockhead aint the only person to use clouds lol, looks nice though your def on the right track with the simples. Id say hit the streets with that ish
     
  16. Engine.357

    Engine.357 Senior Member

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    I know he's not the first but I got my Idea from one of his Handstyles and just wanted to credit him without pissing anyone off, I used some of Giant's throwie letters the other day and everyone got pissed so I don't want that to happen again
     
  17. JETPACK!!

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  18. Engine.357

    Engine.357 Senior Member

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    I squeezed 'em together in Illustrator and I feel those letters look good spread out a little even though I kind of see what your saying...

    I like how it flows but the first 3 letters have a lot of curvature and the K seems too pointy and less curvy compared to the T A and M
     
  19. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    dude loose the halo and like you said it's sloppy, you got a good idea of some style so keep improving, just write it out like 300 times and get good at it, also squeeze the letters together a bit
     
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  20. m.ziggy

    m.ziggy Senior Member

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    the more i look at it the less i like it, suggestions?