bump for crits

chump- ur throw style is gettin there, ur 3d is off a bit, but not bad
ctso- give crits to get crits

 

View attachment 358185
what throw.
View attachment 358186
A...
old shit, crits please

hence. its nice, i like the more colplex throws but i like that one.
seyar. that simple is lukkin good, the o isnt good, you shouda mad it just a regular but skinny o. the first e on the second one is good.

 

thanks for the crits yall
ante- i feel that throw, try to bend some bars and make that a peice. i wanna see some full peices from you
ctso- my bad man, i didnt see, i like that last pic, but u should put those in the digi thread

 

rough cut, gonna ink another day.

gotta mod the S a little to make it fit, i know

[Broken External Image]:http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5484/65561923ys5.png

ante -- 2nd pic, it's just got too much going on. the contrasting diagonals just don't work right with your letter. make solid connections with the ends of your bars.

seywhat -- 1st pic's letters are alright, the Es are strange though. 2nd pic, do something different with the L. didn't you write a lot different before? if i remember correctly, that stuff was alright, might wanna drop back and rock that style again?

chump -- generic throw... alright i guess

baze already covered thrice.

 

seywhat, i assume those are based on neighborhood styles from 70's west coast ish, you need to make the bend in the L (before the platform) more in the middle so it doesn't look like a z, and you could fix the o a bit if you just used 4 pieces with singular flexion

(see the L in this, where the middle bend is at)


on the real though i'd work on your hands first the ones up there are pure booty =p

 

[Broken External Image]:http://www.shrinkpictures.com/processed/phpn0ACMkAM.jpg
just a sketch i did a while back
trying out a new style

 

burgers- i like it

im fucked up on a blunt and a bottle of wine I got for free

[Broken External Image]:http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/2346/dscn0417nz5.jpg

 

calling me toy?

 

ahhaha chill man.
i dont even know if your a toy, but im guessin u are since ur in the toy thread.
but watever, the point is i wanted to post that coz it was funny and i went to the first toy thread available.
chya

 

[Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/7118/mar31129yt2.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/6332/mar31130yk3.jpg

 

give crits first man

 

i didnt ask for any,

 

yup

 

Fix the K, and the N a little, take off some of the smaller not needed extensions and put that on a train.

& work on ur handstyle

 

Yeah those dubs are nice. But i didnt once accuse you of not painting, just stated that i wanted to see some of your painted stuff.

 

I Love You Baze <3333

 

haha yall got baze mad..funny stuff baze paints hes also part of the cult 77k so watch nigag will slit ur kids throats

 

yo dont play yourself, posting your pix means you want crits. bumpin them only proves my points.

give crits an dont front like you dont want any.

sonic, i like that a lot lot more than anything else youve done<3
grab another bottle of wine an another blunt an see what else you can do, the only thing im not really feelin is the tail on your T, but it flows too well to remove it imo, try altering it a bit an see what you can get outta it.