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experimenting with a steez
crit me

 

some shit from me and my boy anomski...
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zof that looks cool, only thing I can find that I don't think looks good is the bottom of the E

 

bumper

 

Soboe man, don't ask for crits without giving any then bump your post 3 posts later.

 

zof i always give crits man, i just resently got back from a trip so i havent given any for a couple days thats it

 

well at least dont bump your shit in the same page.

 

haha ok, sorry guys

 

lolz.

 

Vois
Zofo
Clowney

you guys are getting soooo much better

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heres ceks

 

its got potential but im not a big fan of that k, and you should even out the bottom of the last two letters to be where the bottom of the first to are in my opinion.


Ceks itd be a whole lot cleaner if you used a seperate outline color for the letters than what the shadow is

 

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nice canvas, T looks like an S though

 

fukcing dope concept with the sign and colours very nice i love it ^...i just dont like that big black hand you have onit...kinda ruins the background imo...but hey my opinion..still fucking dope.

 

Feelin it rsakens, minus the bar through the left bar of the N, and the little bit undermeath the S.

Half done for an exchange with mosez. New style ive been messin with.

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rsakens- fresh
the rest are ok i guess.

just some quick things


Did this im my buddies black book.

 

son1c- nice letter structure, work on the colors. I don't like the S.
rsakens- Great job man, really clean and good letter structure, I love that K.
t-bur- not really feeling that style, work on your letters.
science- I don't like your letter structure, I'd work a bit on the letters.
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Here's mine, did this on math class. Please give crits

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tbur- go way simpler, to many points and extensions for one letter