thanks for the crits,yea I kinda fucked the outline in a few spots. yo astro,try not to put anything goin through the center of the O or it looks like an A the filler is pretty clean,I like the letters (work on your S) like the direction of the 3D,jus would look nicer with somethin in it. good job overall,keep it up.
everyone just shut the fuck up..get along with each other your ALL in the same boat...if i was a mod id ban you all..esp. Forsaquan wtf his name is.
fuuc,go for it NoCan jus if anyone asks,it was bled by me.jus get creative with that shit. put up your take on it.
View attachment 364582 View attachment 364583 my fav addiction do simples jetpack its a nice simple aytra i like the silver out line its nice teez i dunno i liek the E and M work on the other letters mass its nice as usual mesa i really like it looks good imo
kroc, its looking good, try making your lines smoother and try not to have some of the lines sticking out on your outline. and i dont know what the thing at the end of your first sketch is, but i dont like it. you should take that off. your second one is a lot better. i dont like the dot on your A in the second one though. astro, fix up your S and your O, your S looks like a Y or a lowercase G. and rather than having your bar coming through your O have it coming off the side of your bar. mass your sketch is looking good, try a new backround though, ive never really felt the one you rock.
thanks jet, yours is so nice and clean only thing i can think of is the arrows they look like they don't belong
yo Krok1er google color theory or somethin cuz yer colors are hurtin man.no offense,jus sayin it.try not to leave apart of your piece blank either.its not bad,but I dont see very much personal style,look at other writers an try to develop your own.test what colors look good next to each other.
i like it, but the outline should have been a different color too close to the orange fill, oh and try not to put so much white highlight
the O kinda looks like a Q in my opinion try not to make it go from the middle... try bringing it across from the top more
yo astro that blue piece is bangin. on the second one some parts look all sketched style (bottom of the As legs)I think its look cool if you went with that a lil more throughout. Arode-lookin good.try puttin somethin more original than a dollor sign in the hole of the A feel like a purple outline woulda looked sick.overall pretty clean.