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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. my.favorite.addiction

    my.favorite.addiction Banned

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    thanks for the crits,yea I kinda fucked the outline in a few spots.
    yo astro,try not to put anything goin through the center of the O or it looks like an A
    the filler is pretty clean,I like the letters (work on your S)
    like the direction of the 3D,jus would look nicer with somethin in it.
    good job overall,keep it up.
     
  2. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    everyone just shut the fuck up..get along with each other your ALL in the same boat...if i was a mod id ban you all..esp. Forsaquan wtf his name is.
     
  3. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    astro- i really dig that shit, the s looks like a y, but i think aytro would be pretty dope lol
     
  4. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Word


    Haha you tell em Mass.
     
  5. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    Atlokkkk don't listen to him. your shit is legit. AND I LOVE TO JOCK YO STEEZE SUN.
     
  6. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    thanks all im gonna put up a new one in a lil bit, waiting for my markers
     
  7. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    nice blood, may i bite?
     
  8. my.favorite.addiction

    my.favorite.addiction Banned

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    fuuc,go for it NoCan
    jus if anyone asks,it was bled by me.jus get creative with that shit.
    put up your take on it.
     
  9. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    my fav addiction do simples
    jetpack its a nice simple
    aytra i like the silver out line its nice
    teez i dunno i liek the E and M work on the other letters
    mass its nice as usual
    mesa i really like it looks good imo
     
  10. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    kroc like the letters, nice style, but not the colors
     
  11. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    kroc, its looking good, try making your lines smoother and try not to have some of the lines sticking out on your outline. and i dont know what the thing at the end of your first sketch is, but i dont like it. you should take that off. your second one is a lot better. i dont like the dot on your A in the second one though.

    astro, fix up your S and your O, your S looks like a Y or a lowercase G. and rather than having your bar coming through your O have it coming off the side of your bar.

    mass your sketch is looking good, try a new backround though, ive never really felt the one you rock.
     
  12. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    thanks jet, yours is so nice and clean only thing i can think of is the arrows they look like they don't belong
     
  13. my.favorite.addiction

    my.favorite.addiction Banned

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    yo Krok1er google color theory or somethin cuz yer colors are hurtin man.no offense,jus sayin it.try not to leave apart of your piece blank either.its not bad,but I dont see very much personal style,look at other writers an try to develop your own.test what colors look good next to each other.
     
  14. ObeyTheMustard

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  15. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    i like it, but the outline should have been a different color too close to the orange fill, oh and try not to put so much white highlight
     
  16. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    thnks for the crits ya i suck with colors
    arode the 3d is good and i like your color scheme
     
  17. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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  18. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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    the O kinda looks like a Q in my opinion try not to make it go from the middle... try bringing it across from the top more
     
  19. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    astro got some hot s's
     
  20. my.favorite.addiction

    my.favorite.addiction Banned

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    yo astro that blue piece is bangin.
    on the second one some parts look all sketched style (bottom of the As legs)I think its look cool if you went with that a lil more throughout.
    Arode-lookin good.try puttin somethin more original than a dollor sign in the hole of the A
    feel like a purple outline woulda looked sick.overall pretty clean.