New junk.. Crits please. Camer-nice shit there, good n simple..I like how you did the E in the last one. Ante-that W thing at the bottom is really cool looking, color would make it dope.
understandable, the silver looks fucked on teh photos, it looks mor like lightning or something. yea, do you think i should just work on letter structure more, am i going to abstract or...?
work on your letter structure man, it took me a second to read the first one even WITH your red lines. your making the lines in your second sketch too short. its hard to tell where the bars are. your N kinna looks like a block with cracks.
I'm just letting you all know that I'm very new, so I'm just giving my opinions on your sketches. I'm sorry if I hurt any feelings or anything and if you don't like what I said then you can ignore me. I'm totally new to this and I know that you have to critique to get some critique of your own work. Well here goes. I'll post my sketch after my comments. Ante, you have some nice letters, but in the Wha2 sketch you seemed to do the same thing in each letter. Maybe you could change it up a little bit? The 3d "W" is just a little weird looking to me, no offense. Camer, I really like the last sketch you posted with the "cock roach" at the bottom. That one looks good and I like the "E" in it. I like your color choice too. Capo, I like your style, but it doesn't flow so much. Maybe you could try working on that a little. The color blending in the second isn't working out too great either, no offense. [Broken External Image]:http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z306/DuckOnQuack/IMG00044.jpg Here is mine, if you have any comments please let me know. I just started, so I would appreciate any criticism.
shit is too warped, and i don't mean shit shit. but yea, its almsot like lit should be three dee, its wierd looking. the top one.
Okay, thank you for the critique. I tried to do straight letters with nothing added. Here is my newest sketch. [Broken External Image]:http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z306/DuckOnQuack/IMG00045.jpg
im not feelin it as much as your other one. looks too rushed compared to your other izm. dont make the bar on your A so bar-ish. loose the lines that make it look rectangular. the horizontal bars on your I dont flow with the rest of your letters. i wouldnt put the "one" inbetween your I and S. it looks like CAIoneS. an im definatly not feelin those arrows. they seem too outta place. point the edges a bit. having your arrow a bar, seems wack. the only improvement i noticed is that you actually made the bottom half of your S.. S like, i never liked it before.
i disagree with the CAIoneS part. no one would b dumb enough to read it like that. i was just filling space.