last post for the night... I'm tired. Leski- That's looking good. Keep it up. The End- those letters have SEVERE potential. Make sure they are a little more clean next time. It will bring out the dopeness. Not finished-
everyone seems to be workin hard,big ups. Atlok...how do you do it man?o an what marks you use?? Marone...clean an original,big ups. Tame...no personal offense meant but...its garbage.go to the new to graff thread.practice bars.use 3D.'blocky letters' doesnt = graffiti.it equals lazyiness.make the letters YOUR letters. The End...liken yo style! Leski...especially lovin them i's!! hows this for a bomb? an these? simp? crits please,thanks.
Alright i realize this is pretty wack so you dont even have to tell me, but i wanna finish it anyway but i need some ideas for what do make the E look like , cause ive done like 4 or 5 different ones in there and there all balls ugly. If you hate the piece i dont care. Just gimme an idea what to do with the E. and maybe how to tweak the Z. Cause i actually kinda like the first 3 letters PHA but then it just falls apart. so i figure ill finish it anyway and then make a better ending next time around. Thanks Oh and dont worry bout the little shit everywhere itll get erased. [Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/3449/phazer3ge9.jpg Addict, the throwies arent bad i like the top one the best make a bigger clean one and post it up to let us see it better. And im not feeling that bottom picture at all. The others are lost somewhere inbetween i guess im just not feeling a prominent stlye out of them.
thanks for the crits. Have you tried tweakin a lower case e? also try addin somethin to balance it out on the sides.bubbles drips etc,somethin like that.
hmm no hadnt tries lower case haha that is a good idea though. And i have a further plan for the R so i think itll balance out alil more cause the left side is alittle heavy at the moment.
both above me need to simplify their shit. herb -- specifically what you need to work on is figuring out how to make your bars work together to flow. like... the origins and insertions of them.
i know my shits needs to be simplified. And im new to that style. but im tryin to learn slowly. Any tips on origin and insertion lol Thats why i openly admited the peice was wack... cause it is i realize this. i was just lookin for a good E idea
Crits apreciated... im 3 months new i havent started bombing just yet i wanted to get my style going first. View attachment 366457
thankx for the feedback guys any more tips coments....? dim is looks dope the ar is a bit fucked especial the bar on the r work on that \why dont you use a pencil first and clean up then ? and what are you hiding under the cap
new shizzzzz roke- dope, but maybe try to do a lowercase e thats the only thing i see wrong dim- like everyone else said just fix the r, but i think its still dope overall rsakens- fresh, i love your e's apel- give crits to get crits herbn- i really have no clue what that says tame- its gettin there, fix the top of the m the end- hot, but once u start gettin clean, that shit will be fire
yo riot-the clue an silver one is pretty sick but the F could be mistaken for a T somethin about the arrow commin off the B doesnt quuuuite flow.but close.keep workin. the background of the city is ill but the letters dont do it justice.
View attachment 366496 i dunno about this, trying to work a new style, rough around the edges, to say the least. Any ideas? (Newest guts sketch/ Very small for some reason
its not working, i know ur experimenting but id say next sketch keep the concept but retsrain it a lil