havent posted here in a while..critsarealwaswelcome [Broken External Image]:http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7073/cimg7575ea6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7023/comicfreakpr4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6016/freaknotepg3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9137/freakouts2rx9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2174/japanzy7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7606/stylesav0.jpg rsakens thta reallly pops out dude...is it the grey that does that? and mar one..ill color schemin and capo i dunno abt them dude..the extensions and letters are wierd...i wud say do simples..but u already posted that u are..so umm..the best thing u can do is look at ill flics and develop ur own style. but keep it simple
old NY style is hot the A dont look right tho mught wanna make the top not bend to match the rest of the letters and give it better flow overall, on ur simples jut the top of ur E out to the right more letter looks kinda weak if the second arm of the E is the same length as the first View attachment 366768 View attachment 366769 BUMP
i got 92 freak- the fill is kinda ugly on the first, the colors anyway, and the K needs work on the second
wow theres actually 92 bubbles on that page.. impressive? as for some crits i don't think I'm feeling that diagonal thing you have going there invasion and freak could work on colouring maybe? as for me crits?
bumb and a new one =] keane backwards [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/ffawdjwdskjwlie.jpg?t=1209139951
Nice sniper rifle Amk : D I gotta work on the flow of my N... it leaves an awkward looking gap.. [Broken External Image]:http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9325/photo373ev0.jpg
Nice awp mass lol..(its an awp right?)or w.e looks good Zoef nice style,kinda original rsakens-not liking the s on the one you bumped esco-simples simples tasty-work on that O (its an o?)or the letter thats between the b and p,it looks weird I <3 My City done on a broken wood board View attachment 366929 yes i know that S is bigger than the other letters i just realised that crits? edit:forgot to post this View attachment 366930
rfi- i like ur style its so different. the 3-d is nice but it looks a little off. sum one might have already said that.
Yea, thanks for pointing out the flaw in the 3d.. fixed it decently now- [Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3992/photo373ko5.jpg Still not perfect.. but meh.
your r's suck. all of them look like Ps. dont connect them, and if you are, make it an uppercase and give it another leg. and im not a big fan of the diamond shape