Bump..

Nest, try not to overlap ur letters..

 

Smile, fatter letters lose the huge circle for the I and not make the bottom of the e go up so much
The letters look a bit plain too

 

uhh need more crits thx

primal, ya man dont use that marker yet, save it for wen u get better cuz it looks like a pretty good marker, but u need to practice alot more, and make it flow man

 

Looking nice Avenger, just somehow try and make the first half a little bit more legible and maybe lose the star at the start

 

Fuck you, that's just the style I use. Clearly, you're an idiot.

 

Way to get so defensive.

And ^Pretty good Avenger^

I forgot who said remove the star at the starting A, but yeah I agree with you.

 

I posted this already in the throwup thread, but I figured I'd post it here as well since there's 2 tags. Any criticism appreciated.
Avenger- that looks pretty good, but if you don't abreviate that, I think you might have trouble with the throwup. maybe AVNGR. your choice. It looks good though.

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alright so i racked this weird marker today... It's alright. I can't complain. but check the handstyle. its ehhhh. that "A" isn't the "A" i usually use. I'll post more later.



Don't mind the old, shitty throw in the back. i was just fuckin around a while back =P

 

smile- thats way too plain, get some style. especially on the s, s's are the best. i'd lose the underline too.
oaklander you post here to get crits, don't cry when someone gives them to you.
spaz- besides the a, i really like it. good job.

 

^Thanks dude^

I'll post another later with a different A.

 

Lots of critz going on in here. Some good, some bad.
this thread runs better when everyone tries to help out and give their opinion.

TronMzero; Not to bad a mop/marker there, just pause for a second at the end start and end of the letters to make them cleaner, or dont if you like it rougher.
Give it a little squeeze if its a mop.

Gyse; Work out that bottom one, I like how it flows. With the letters like that.
I do something similar with my tag.

AvengerAV: you've got my opnion already, just clean it up a bit and loose that first star. But dont do anything else to it !

smile_; Go out and grab some markers or write your tag smaller with the pencil.
Bolder lines would probably help you out a lot.

Nesk1; Really like that first on as is. If anything make it a tad bit wider so each letter has a bit more space, but just a tad.

Oaklander: I like that style you've got going, keep with it.

Only toss a halo on if you've hit a heaven spot, or if your handstyle can carry it.

Remember this is MY opinion and suggestions, you dont have to take any of it.

 

thanks, yeah i racked the marker today. It's not too great. but yeah I'll take your advice thanks man.

(new pics coming soon too)

 

spaz? theres one of those in boston...

 

spaz- nice flow
avernger- dont put the letters as close
smile- y is there a random line in between the M and the I


it was mad rainy any crits?

 

yeah, dont paint in the rain. i cant tell what you write from that heart picture.

 

haha WAYY old.. i think it was my first one, im not sure. only pic i have tho :/

 

I suppose I was a bit too harsh. My bad tempest. But still, that sticker blatantly reads defacer.

 

yeah i have no idea what that says cin...

 

TronMzero- i like it other than the little extension on the A.
smile_- ditch the halo

quick rework of some letters
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