TIGHT, nice idea about the dots, and that bit thinggy above the leg of the R is a little too far out. but besides that it looks tight.
chump - i like the simples a lot. the s is dope. i would take out the quote things at the end sanrtizer - that looks nice. not feelin the leg of the letsgobombin - if you cleand it up. i think it would look good. fix the d. fuckin with a new name akoner..dont know if someone already writes it [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8720/ak1zl5.jpg did them really fast. just to see what people think.
oak- i cant tell what the 2nd letter is work on that its like a blob View attachment 368460 View attachment 368461 View attachment 368462 View attachment 368463
tryin new shit, couldnt think of a y. exchanges tomorrow ante- i dont think u should have done the outline and the backround the same color, other than thats its pretty straight geks- dont bring your s up so high on the top simp, thats the best one imo keep workin with that oak- i like the a but try to make the k more like the a like all rounded off nasr- fuckin ill, thats all i can say man. pie- both styles are dope, u sould try to work them together some how
yo roten check out the last page first post, it was my latest sketch. and i watched your new signature for a good 2 mins
I dig the C a lot better, and you lined up the bars on your A way better, the bar in the middle should still be a lil more connected and not just floating there so much though, also a bit smaller, it blocks too much of the letters. Your I is still wonky, it's smaller and more connected which is better, but the bar on the top doesn't look like a bar, it's not consistant at all. And I think I've heard something similar to that (About my sig) at least 8 times in the last hour.
yea so i have a few different crits for this some saying i should keep at the style and some saying i should try a different approach, any more views? sor - i think that blue simple and the last one have potential, with that second one lose the brown shit inside the letters and the white/silver lines in the shadow imo. after that if you cleaned it up itd look alright irekn. nasr - the only thing i dont like about it is the extension at the end of the S, kinda kills the flow, oak - i think you really have to fix up that N... i dont know any advice to fix it up maybe try a capital idk. seyar - thats pretty good i just dont like the leg on the R. maybe have it coming out further up thepointy bit (idk what to call it) im not sure.
i gotta sick new style im workin on i like it a lot its got potential imo i will post pics in a few days wen i get my comp to work im on my friends ps3
aesop- looking good, nice and simple, some of the 3ds weird though, like on the A and E fonone- I cant even read that, I'm thinking go for a style change up, those colours are kinda sketchy too, oranges and blues sometimes look weird cause theyre complementary colours. try some simple stuff and dont work too hard on extensions and connections yet seyar- thats dope, I'm not enjoying the little y in the middle, but other then that its hot
its not 3d bro. its a drop shadow aiming towards the left... i dunno why i did it... i'll just make it 3d. but rock simples. thats the neverending crit. everyone will say that also.
drop shadow, 3d, its all behind the letters to me. so true about the simples though haha but yeah looking dope
ne crits avone keep ur bars the same thickness irekn the letters are good but i dont relly like how they overlap
Ante - Aesop rock is sick dude, and i like the simple with the cursive inside especially, the a seems a little out of proportion to me, kinda like an o Backdoralley - I also agree, one of the most mesmerizing sigs ever, like how does that all fit in there???
theres a pretty big writer for GRL in NYC that writes avone, and that fool is up everywhere. just sayin
thanks for the crits guys. last one for tonnite... just thought of it... View attachment 368533 whats. I KNOW THE S IS FUCKED UP... I ADDED IT AT THE END... blue-i can't make out the letters bro.