[Broken External Image]:http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6787/newrdx8.jpg doo doo! trying to come up with a new R. ignore the sloppyness.
Throw the R's foot the other way maybe, it almost looks like an A, and make the leg of it closer to the body of the R.
best tip for comin up with new letter shapes man, is to write a hole page of them by hand and beefing them up simply, itll let u find hole new structure and will set the basic shapes in your head so you can just throw em out...and be more creative...heres a new digital, concrete insanity, what ya'll think? and one in colour, a bit over the top tho i think?
bump for crits that shit is do-o-ope seti, i think the colors could flow better on the color one, but it doesn't take too much away from it the way they are
cheers dude, i like those^ ide say the first ones the best tho, although i like the fill uv got on the side bits on the last one, uv got a good overall shape/flow to the pieces, just do some more id say...try putting them into photoshop or something and stretching them different ways to find a different flow then redraw em, believe me ull come up with some more abstract but flowing pieces....
ante! your T looks like an F. i honestly thought it said WHAFS.. i lolled. seti, thats ill, theres a bit of deadspace in the middle that i feel would look better filled with something. but thats still ill son. good job
squider - your tag is flame. n your pieces are pretty chill. like the second one the best. AnteUp - i wouldnt put the extensions on the bottom part of the w. it makes it a little confusing. n the t does look like an f akoner. new name. n new style A [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8672/akakthrowieju6.jpg crits?
bump ak- i like it but try doing something to the left leg of the k its weird squider- looks good i gotta admit i cant read it but it stil looks good seti- that is insane, now try drawing it recon- hella sloppy, change the leg of the r and keep it the same length i know its probably a result of the sloppiness but its off putting ante- i dont mind the style its ok but some letters are better like the w & h, make your t distinctive avone- dont do backgrounds for now and keyboard letters then bend bars curve it, straight it and do whatever you want to do until you have something that looks good , i know you mightbe tired of hearing it but you WILL look back and be thankful crits?
seti- really ill trest- i like the top one pocs- the red one is pretty dope, just fix the bars in the loop of the p ak- i like your more rounded style better
birthday piece seywhat- put in a real y, i like the balance but not your a the bars seem strange and what do you mean by fix the loop on the p
View attachment 368602 View attachment 368603 [Broken External Image]:http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/hoer6.jpg yes, theres eggs in a pan under my throw. insane- that shits wild. SEYAR- that simples ill, id just work on that R, it doesnt have to have perfect symmetry with the s, id fuck with that right leg some more. littleweapon- go simpler and have fun being in the national guard. infame- the top one is better than the bottom, on some old school ish, id get a new E though. the curve in the middle looks ugly imo. just use the E from your bottom sketch or something. pocs- its good that youre using bars, but lose the extentions and just focus on your letters. extentions wont make the letter look better if the actual letter itself isnt good. try skinnyer bars too. ak- keep working at it. Reco- DOOPPE simple son. EDIT: HAHA COPE IS IN GTA4.