Alright guys thanks
I stopped putting the n over the o after a while beucase some people told me it was too pushed together, but then other people like it. I guess it's just taste.

and milk Somebody saw me writing and told my parents so I know how it sucks, I still write the same name but I usually war bandanas and hat or something whenever I go out I don't really take many chances anymore.




But anyways I tried to make it like the bus style, what do you guys think?

 

what does it say?
tesone?

 

Yea

 

You even wear that stuff for just tagging? And I'm really liking those. Especially the Es, and the star. Sick man.

And, if my parents or a simple by stander knew, it'd be okay. (Not speaking as if I'd like to get caught anytime soon. You get the idea though). They're not going to tell the cops. But seeing as the cops know...If they were to gather enough evidence, they could charge me. So just to be safe, I'm changing my name.

 

Yes.

 

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Alright, what do you guys think? I like 2 and 3 the best. But I can only stick with one. Which should I use, and how can I make it better? And don't mind the screwed up astrick on number 3. It doesn't normally look like that. xD

 

Yeah Iw ear all that just for tagging I get really paranoid anymore

I like 4 the best milk just push the letters close together and 2's not that bad either, just keep practicing and it'll get alot better.

 

Alright. Cool. Now to go practice some. Just came up with the name 15 minutes ago. EVERYTHING I came up with last night and earlier this morning was taken by a significantly famous writer. No matter how much I thought I was being original. But Aris isn't taken by anyone special. So I'll use it.

 

aight heres my tag i write drip star
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any feedback?

 

yeah...
change your name.
drip star?
wtf?

 

fine... how about like drip

 

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hows this sry for the awful image quality

 

*sighs* drip star? seriously? ok first. get rid of the '!'. next get rid of the huge i dot, its ok 2 make a circle just not a huge one. then destroy the superswirl on the r and get rid of the asterix. str8ten up ur d(its rotated, making it smaller (and weirder(yes, this is a bracket within a bracket)) than the other letterz) like the other letters and dont leave the gaps between the bars.

 

Re do everything, even the name.

 

The D and the I are weak. The R isn't that bad, the P is too plain and drop the big circles abouve the I and below the exclamation. Big circles are more for girls handwriting than writers handstyles. The astrix isn't bad, but yo, just work over the whole alphabet really hard, then try to come up with a name.



**Here's a personal oppinion of mine. Take it for what it's worth.. If your handstyle would fit and fill a Hello sticker, or a lined piece of paper nicely, it probably doesn't have much flow or shape to it. Alot of dope tags look like they're trying to move or jump as opposed to a standard signature across a line.


yeah.

 

Hey guys.. could i possibly get some crits?
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jut rockin some backwards names: ENAM

 

Sarz, don't overlap your S and A. And change your R...

Enam, that looks pretty dope. All I have to say is give your M some curves like a woman.

 

maybe when you crit someone else first