ahh. ic. i wonder why i searched pictures of "cracked concrete" on google images then... i guess its a mystery.
give crits. get rid of those bubbles. your letters get bigger as they progress. dont fill it until your structure is much better, or at least till your fills get better. your just wasting your markers and it distracts people looking at it from finding the small things that would help you improve the most. especially a gray fill bump
charm, i like that one way more than the rest. and you can leave the C a little bit taller than the rest. you could use help-lines to line it up at the top.
esco 93, start off in black and white is a good idea, i can see how my colours are distracting people from helping me, keep your letters at even heights when they're meant to be at even heights. Practice filling in your shadows better. all in all though i like your general idea.
thanks jetpack but uhh is there anyway to make my structure better like ant techniques and charm i think you should lose all the extra shit goin on inside ur letters an work on the actual style of the letters...thx 4 the crits
Charm-the letters are dope but i really love the fill Vandal-really dope man jetpack-dope esco-dont like the fill some thing i did its in portugues it says dinheiro [Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4707/88nt0.jpg CRITS PLEASE
sky i love that style i like to practice that style to but that isnt bad jus keep workin on it but im likin it
sky, i wouldn't put the I in the hole of the D, plus it flows the wrong way. and i wouldnt wrap things around your letters. like the top of your R and D. keep it up though. vandal, drop the crown. it's done right. but you still cant rock it. i'd widen the middle bars on your W too. and esco, i would work on smoothening out your lines. take a sheet of paper, and draw a bunch of half-circle lines and circles. when your circles are smoother, try another sketch. your O and the loop of your R will look a lot cleaner and smoother. i'd also try to bring the bottom half of your C up a bit, you have a lot of deadspace in between your C and O. keep it up though
@ SKY_ONE: Cheers man. Really like the colour scheme and the way your letters flow is sweet. The R into the last O could use some work if you get me..
esco, ut lines are tooo thin, u have thick letters and thin blakc lines, that arent showing detail, make ur black outlines thicker, plus u need to kno your stucture of ur letters, where it bends and which bit curves where, that will come with experience, so now do another sketch! charm dont listen to people that are super toy, which is sky (sorri sky but we have to start somewhere) just stick to them simples.
Hey thanks shamee I do a rake of those in the same modified simples but not alot of people like that style, i will stick with them though. Oh also, esco, decent throw up, look more at keeping your shadows in the right places and your "C" looks a bit off. Keep trying though.
i shouldnt use what?? if its the thin lines its cuz i only had a sharpie extra fine point...lol i wasnt gunna outline it wit a jumbo hard to buff or sumthin