Edit: Sezer- i like it alot but for some reason, the leg on the P bugs me Cin- shorten the top bar of the C, lose the huge dot on the I an d replace it with something else, and bring the N a little closer. it looks long and lanky compared to the rest of the letters. and clean it up a little. the lines are real shakey and sloppy. something i did last night i might paint it. any crits?
Bets i really like it other than the bottom of the t keep it straight and the random lines next to the B but other wise its really simple
very nice betsy. make the loop on the bottom of the T face the other way so fags dont confuse it with a J. and yea those quotation marks on the left of the B are shit lol but yea those are tricky letters and you can pull em off nice, keep that ish up
Bets - I like everything but the T and them quotations could use a bit of adjusting, other than that it's all sick. Drakula - Nice, simple but nice. I think you could do better with them 2's though. Something about them... It might just be me.
Drakula Thats Fucking Dope, U Make Me Proud And Depressed At The Same Time, I Remember When You Started Posting And You Sucked, Few Months Of Advie Later And You Blow My Shit Away
Thanks, i know the T is shit. gotta fix that haha thanks, ill sketch it up again with the T flipped around. now that you mention it, i think itll make it look better and less crammed. thanks that would make a nice roller
damn drakster, fresh fresh fresh. the H looks alittle off, just BARELY so dont worry about that. id just say the background is a dull green. you need a more aggressive green (i sound like im on crack haha) and that silver makes that pop, is that a chrome paint prisma?? P.S the colour shouldn't matter, its about the letturssss so dont dry to go crazy with colours yet
Cheers.Just shows that listening a bit goes a long way. To Duppy yeah the 2's are a bit out proportion.I ave never written numbers before though so maybe I should start doing more number work...
i havent sketched forever... piece doesnt flow... wack as fuck... but hell i needed to post something [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080521_1.jpg i found out some dude writes Eros so i gotta change my name cause hes madddddd dope... i might change it to Saroe.
Bets- Im feelin that shit, the S is dope. Kach- Nice bro, simple, clean lines, I like it. Soboe- The R is just bigger than everything else, other than that its good. Adware- Dope, I would just level out all the letters.
yea the OS is more me... i was tryin to get a grimey steez... didnt work hahaha ill stick with more of that OS steez
View attachment 374268 todays sketch drak- dope for sure, like all ur shit adware- its not bad, pretty clean. im just not feelin it though, idk why soboe- like u said, stick with that os steez bets- ill, but the t does kind of look like a j
adware - the fact theres no 3d at the top of the W kinda beaks up the flow once u use add-ons try puttin some at the top to help the flow Soboe - I like the R actually i think it was the 3D that fucked u up insead of those addons at the top and bottom just re do it and put a drop shadow Bets - pute sex but turn that curve onto the other side so it reads better View attachment 374281 sketch for art class, crits?