Jus Do It!no ?'s Lol You Dont Need Style At First Jus Get Ur Letter Structure Down Then Worry Bout Puttin Some Style Into It!

 

plz crit

 

vois im really feelin the top one there nd i like the simples done on the wood keep it up

 

joshthesk8ter5 - its nice, clean, but i see little to no letter structure, id have to say work on some simples for a while before you jump into the crazy shit

VaNdAL xBA!x - use bars, go back to simples for a while, thats all that can really be said at this point

ctso - that bottom one is pretty fresh, try adding a drop shadow next. as for the top two your pars are all out of shape, try to keep them nice and straight more like your bottom sketch

seywhat - sorry dude musta looked over your sketch on the other page or something. structure is good, bars are nice, 3d is good, only think im having a problem with is that 2nd last letter, it doesent flow with the other letters well and its hard to tell what it is but i think its a Z?

heres a new sketch, i was feeling rather steezy today

 

THanks vandal! But can you tell me what you mean by letter structure?? :O Im kinda lost :S

 

bump over talk and for crits.

 

Got bored yesterday. Let the hating begin!

 

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The top 2 i dont like so much, they look too skinny and sloppy. the 3rd one is dope. finish it and post the result

haha, just to clear it up, im not Kans, i did that for an exchange. The bottom of the S isnt supposed to be an arrow, but now that i look at it..it does look like one.

Im down.

for yours, i like it alot, i dont know what you write exactly, but the 4th letter looks like an L..but in your handstyle it looks like an E..so im not sure...its a really dope L if it is one though lol

 

vois, try to expand with different styles, and don't do the same letters everytime with your name, i seen that one voice millions of time different colors, no disss. but yea.

 

yaa thanks impale im tryin to find suttin that i could go paint for ym first peice plus i jus started writin this name bout last week but i really liek you IMPALE u did shit nasty dude

 

sins goos shit the first S is a lil fucked that the top but other wise i like

 

Shits dopeee. your style reminds me alot of my homie batle

 

bets and impale- the second to last letter is an L, i write esole.
i'll get on that exchange now bets, anyone else down?

 

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that lifer throw is ill

 

Adware - really like the last two especially the last overlap the letters a little
Impale - the alternating colors are awesome just use another color other than blue it doesnt go with the brown so well
vois - like the first one but bring out the I a little and try and change it up some

 

thats actually 2 shades of green, my cam fucked up the colours haha

 

oh i see but yeah i really like your letter structure