Kroc - I like the first and last one. The second one either needs a bit of work or it just looks bad because the others are coloured, and i'd say the last two letters on the first could be better if it helps at all. Still nice though.

Amro - I think you should go "readed" it again.

 

...you did burst my bubble.
...ass

 

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Dope.

 

I did a simple.. i'll send it later.. i need to scan it! But can someone tell me if i should colour it?

 

i wouldnt waste my time.

 

ok.. but what should i do on it?

 

Very rarely do I see someone's stuff and immediately go "I would sooo paint with that guy". You are one of these people, dope stuff, post more.

 

bumpin' for crits

 

Bizar, i like ur colour what kind of marker is it?

PS. It ok if on my simple.. i've put 3d?

 

just fucking post it.
then people will tell you what to do.

 

prismas, and yes

 

bizar, i like it but the bottom of the B is too small and the z needs some tweakin. Its got potential though!

 

Okk how much are prismas colour? and there u go some of my sketches

This is my simple;


There is my other works..









Please crits them all

 

you're already better than like 60% of the people who come in and out of here.
try making all your bars the same width.

 

AMRO you're on the right track with the letters.get rid of all the extensions/bits and concentrate on the main letters.The A and M are the best at the moment but keep working on them.Go to the new to graff thread and learn about how to use bars to construct equal letters.The R is out of proportion and the O's hole is too small and is positioned in the wrong place.

 

the top one is the only one thats gonna get crits besides do simples
make letters same size
find a better way to do ur r cus the top right of it makes the peice look funny

 

Thanks but what u mean by " try to make my bars the same width " ?
Can someone tell me where is the new to graff threads :S?
thanks to everyone that crits me i'll do my best to become better!
And yess.. My r look funny.. i don't know how to do it... and the O.. i don't know how to make it nice.

 

that pink " toy 4 ever ' describes that stuff perfictly. Keep on sketching u got a hell of alot to learn. thats my advice.

 

amro
one way to fix ur r is to take the top of ur a and put it on the top of ur r
like so
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