ALIEN.. make ur letter the same size After it should be perfect
For my R... it nice! but what i should do with the O? I hate to put it normaly

 

do ur a but throw a bottom bar in there
like so
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Oh man! IT A O!! do you have msn? we could talk more easy? and thanks for helping me

 

check ur pms

 

Okaiie i've worked on my R

 

nice.

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Nice atlok! i like ur character

 

thank ye cais. Nice character haha

Before and after-

 

Woahh man.. number1! U are very good in colouring eh?

 

talk to me on MSN tomorrow

 

doope color skillz. looks like aztek rouins

 

bizar clean up your lines when outlinin take time
amro work on your bars
and ive crited everyone else
crit me pleaseee

edit
mar thts dope and
alien idk wht to say

 

damn man... thats a nice piece. prismas?

E: @ kroc

you cant always get other people to crit you, you can probably do it yourself. just stick to simples for now, and dont bother coloring.

 

o lol the colors were random btw and ill post tht style when it looks clean ill do sum sipler shit and post tht to

 

alright, sounds good. if you become stuck just read the new to graff thread again.

 

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the fill with the light colors and 3d were inspired by keane and the red one is a sharpie freestyle im doin sum simples now to

 

try to make your stuf smaller cuz it looks like its too big so ur loosing cleanliness and style on it

 

ehh.. im just not really feeling those ones. do some simps with as few bars as possible, and literally 0 extensions.

 

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