I've just seen that with simple letters.. ( Like mork one ) you can do awesome things! I just need to get the insperation and i'll do one like this
MorK you need to wrok on your lines most of them are shakey the colour choice is not all that but im not a huge fan of brown it looks mucky if you know what i mean dope colour combos = green + blue, purple + yellow/orange, red + turquiose dont bother with things like characterising your letters with stuff like teeth and eyes its not worth the effort spend more time working on your lines and making tiny adjustments to your letters try and make all the letters have the same feel -neza
AmrO you need to work and plain letters made from bars that are the same width so if the side of your A is thick make the cross bar the same forget 3D for now work on making all your letters the same size and proportion youll get there long way to go though
forget that man just look at some of the pro's colour choices and you will see what i mean im not saying bite fills or nothing but borrow the colours
simples for you my friend the whole thing looks awkward try keeping your letters on the same line and the same dimensions for now i know its boring but it seems you need to work on your structure more trust me the more simples you sketch the better you will gradually realise how far you can push a letter the N is barely recognisable and the join on the o is tottally out of place simples simples simples
have you ever heard of a simple? do you know what one is? have you ever tried one? if the answer to any of these is a no then try sketching a simple by that i mean boring letters like the ones on your keyboard the do that some more when you have finished that ... do it again......and again ... -neza
^ dude shut up. you have no idea what your talking about. cyber, some of that shit is dope. keep doin your thing.
yeah ok man.... looking at those sketches i can see all kindsa crap in all of them none are "dope" and more than half the real writers here will agree and if you think they are that say a whole lot about you the guy aint gonna imporve unless you tell him where he's going wrong this is a case of trying to run before you can walk i aint beefing but thats the truth
ima leave you guys to it but one last thing try and spot 1 clean sketch amongst those pencil lines and all sorts the second from last one could be good but still needs work -neza
Syer - only one im feelin is the last one, i aint a big fan of the top of the S and where the Y goes into it the rest of it looks good tho Mork - not rly feelin it, try to put in some colours u can blend View attachment 375018 crits?
here is some characters which ones look better [Broken External Image]:http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5619/dsc00330zh8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/8274/dsc00332vj5.jpg i posted this in the character thread but it looks like no one goes there