what are you talking about? ... know the limit for toy and what not :/ You may not be feeling it.. That doesn't mean it's toy...
yeah mean just chill out, besides, i feel i can definatly take the verbal abuse from someone of your caliber...
im on the casio battle now, il continue yours later tonight or tomorow in school. dont worry, itl be in your pms by the end of tomorow
hahaha battle you over the internet?? thats the only way to decipher real writers, sorry i forgot. HAHAHA!!!!
yeah the shape of the second one is kind of odd. i find the structure abit too thin in your first one imo.
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when ya say structure what specifics do ya really mean cuz i been writing for more the 10 yrs and this is the first place i hear this..