put your letters closer together and re-post, just keep tweakin this til it flows properly and tone down the extra shit (the "s, dots and arrows).

Nine9- the simple tags on your flickr are nice

 

my tag it isnt my best one but its the only one i got flicked, i need to move the bit inside the s a bit more right to take up more dead space

kas?- its hardly readable, take the bits off the s and fit it together the k and a seem like they would flow together

 

wasnt sure if you were refering to me there, if so, it says KAYO, and thanks, am currently working on a version 2

 

ye, the y and o don't seem to be y and o's at all

 

preety sexshee

 

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New Tag. "Kobra"

 

cheers, i didnt really realise it was that good until i did my first one for a while and thought 'its pretty good'
edit: does that make sense?

 

Bump
Kobra go simpler I'd say
Letsgobombin that's looking real nice

 

ohh god man u need work...

 

Nesk1- first 2 'S' look like 8s && scratch tha 'R'

 

Thanks Shone, and Bankz any idea on what I should work on or just re do the whole thing?

 

looks like you one lined the whole thing...looks like it says SOEM...lolz..


...more space between ur letters also...becuz peopel who jus randomly see ya shit wnt be able to decypher what it says...
the S on the #1 and #2 look like 8;s

and on the #2 you cant even see the O at all..

 

a new handy..ne crits?? View attachment 376269

 

idkk.. just trying new stuff

 

Thanks Bankz, and Lyfe go simpler

 

whats that say??? i see like 4 L's and a 472

 

Kayotix it's supposed to say Lyfe2 I think
And what about this?

I know my O is a bit dodgy, but I can fix that.

 

the top one looks cleaner, but the last letter on it looks like a Y

 

If I didn't make the E and the R touch do you think it'd make it look alot more like a R?