Getting tired of writing tesone

Crits?

Smile it's nice liek teh s especially

kaze, Make your z a bit wider
Fist one's best imo

sebroh
It's good but lose that swirl at the bottom
and why'd you start it out one liner and then stop?

shuk
I like it, nice and simple.

 

since mark198, tracy168, and mitch77 (famous OG NY train writers) didn't use their name, or anything...

 

Ummm, yeah. That sucks.

 

not many people do, but if u wanna go for the strait edge style, make sure the letters are consistent in size and some like the L are slightly rotated, fix it, it is looking a bit shady at the moment though, odd style

 

is that a straight edge style? if it is, straightedge sucks even harder

 

thnx

 

i write clover
what do you think?

 

clover, dont use the arrow as an "O" and your "V" looks like an "L" when you use it to cross your E.

 

yeah i use the arrow cause i havent found an O that flows yet.
do you think if i keep the V straighter when it crosses the E it'll work?

 

wh oever put the showings up on ur sig..did it purposly ..lol...probbly soem teen...

unless its fake

 

Probably final change on my name

ANy thoughts?

clove
Do some simples.

 

Yarbles- Chage that R. It dose fit.... Remove that lil thing above the K i think it is. You really should just start over cause It hard to read. Like re-write it and play with 1 letter at a time till u get it the way you like it then base all of you letters like that. Helps it flow.

 

try to make it more simple and less edgy

 

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that green irekn is dope except for the n

 

irekn- your second one is probably the best, but you need to work on it a bit, use a thicker marker for the second one and try to work out a new n
aikr-how do you say that? is it ay-ker? it looks good just take the bit on the top of the k off and maybe join the bottom of the k and i
bace- take out all the random dots and it will be ok
clover- start over from simple
skelic- same as above

 

lols yeah it was on a bus and it was bouncing everywhere so it came out real fucked up.

 

hy, i write for about 6 months...and this is my tag for now

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