his "r" and "e" it looks like you did a shitty job of biting it.

 

the K looks really smashed - how big is this throw?

 

i like it
crit this charac i was thinkin bout doin
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i no i bit the lip just foolin around

 

yeaaa fonone..work on thaa -_-



one of many ... critss, opinions?

 

i think u shud change the n but thats just my opinion...

 

tru tru.. im sick of thaa 'n' but i have no idea how i would change it

 

is it a capital or a l case
oh and crit my character

 

its lower case.. u could tell its an 'n' tho righh??

&& wrong thread for characters but im not really feelin it lol u prolly coulda done better && i think u should take tha drag off his neck or w.e it is

 

2 letter throw.. "sh"
?

 

At first I thought it was just a h with speech marks.
I'd try and make your S a tad more legible.

 

umm...can i get some crits? cuz i really wanna improve

 

Give crits to get crits

 

dude the H is fine looking but the s awww try something new maybe?

 

its was over like 2/3 over the freight, which was a 20 footer.

 

I think that S has some potential... you just need to make it look more like an S.



any more crits on my throwie?

 

i relly likes the s but the n and h not th best....
dunno not connecting to it..

 

shun i think ur good to go if thas wat u like.. && im feelin tha 'n' .. theres not much u could do wit those but i think u pulled it off clean wit ur own idea

EDIT: thanks for tha crits everybody.. but if u seen thaa 2 letter throwie on a wall . would it b atleast legible? or do i need to get rid of thaa 's'?

 

make it more ledgible

 

quick new style not with bars though just something i would think about sprayn
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