thanks for the crits everone. shone- if that was on a wall, the S wouldnt be readable, and the H would look like an N. just space out the horizontal segment of the S, if that makes sense, and it will help alot, and the whole thing will look better. nukes- dont think about sprayin that. just because it is a throwie doesnt mean the letters dont have structure. keep your letter style consistent. (the N has no corners, while the K has sharp edges). keep the original letter structure in mind when sketching. (the K's little foot thing on the bottom doesnt flow, it should be avoided). hope that helps, keep sketching.
shone: the 's' isnt really that legable. its hard to tell that its an 's'. id say tweek it a bit shun: really feelin the 'un'. the 's' is nice but i don't really think it fits with the rest. that might just be me new throw for me View attachment 378791
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lookin pretty neat osnapizzel [Broken External Image]:http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/6715/img3405db3.jpg
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crits on throwie, my "a" looks like a "d" so eh: [Broken External Image]:http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/7633/corabz8.png
sorry i was just scrolling through random pages but chump it may be a good idea to make your "h" kicker off the end a circle and not a rectangle to set it away from the "k" just something to ponder over.
you should lose the full o on the p and make them all the same size also the bottom of the a goes down too far and you should make your e rounder even then though, i wouldnt paint it yet
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