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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    View attachment 382719 collab peice
    View attachment 382720 quick pen sketch for kasr

    gore?- pretty dope, maybe lose some of the extensions, but not too bad
    zen- keep workin with the simps, just use bars and make letters
    gizurd- deff fresh fill, do u just write gi, if not id like to see a full peice from u. dope style
    rasek- im feelin the e in the top peice alot more than the bottom, but ur gettin ur letters down good man, keep it up
    unsuccessful- dont be tryin to act hard, its the internet fool. work on actually makin letters, if u wanna try wildstyle u gotta get simps on lock
    stake- letters are nice, you shoulda just done an a instead of the skull
     
    Last edited: Jun 24, 2008
  2. calculating infinity

    calculating infinity Elite Member

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    unsuccessful, your stuff lacks structure from what i can make out, stop trying to be tough and either outline it and so everyone can see the structure or do something more simple. no one here is intimidated by you and the more angry you get over fair criticism the less people respect/like you.

    gizurd, that fill is really cool, i wish i had the patience for coloring stuff in.


    zen, its good that youre keeping it simple, the middle one is the best so far. zen was the first name i ever wrote semi-seriously and i found that adding an S at the end helped a lot with the overall flow.

    i didnt even bother coloring this in since i fucked up
    [Broken External Image]:http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2448/0624082249ik5.jpg
     
  3. unsuccsessfull

    unsuccsessfull Senior Member

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  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    no, i dont. because your name dosen't look like your keyboard at all.

    the FUCK is better than your actual piece.

    i dont even see an H.
     
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  5. GimmieGotShot

    GimmieGotShot Senior Member

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    the only thing halfway good to anything is that E
    thats not your keyboard
    GATES <------------------draw letter that look like that
     
  6. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  7. liquid swords

    liquid swords Senior Member

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  8. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    unsuccsessfull i like the painted A
     
  9. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    ai121.photobucket.com_albums_o227_JakeRidesBmx23_WebCam_20080624_2151.jpg

    its been a couple months.
    i know its whack but crits?

    Liquid-that shits wayy to fuckin hot.
     
  10. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    stop talkin so much! fuck. i just deleted 60 posts of bullshit.
     
  11. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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  12. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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  13. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    kinna looks like a goldfish
     
  14. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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  15. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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  16. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    the shadow on the s of the kasr isn right, besides that its good.

    jerse, some of your extensions on the last one could have been done better.
     
  17. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    i only really like the e but what do you think? i missed a bit of 3d on the e, it says test
    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_HPIM1247.jpg
    ill post crits later, i just wrote all the crits then acidentally pressed back
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    sey- i like the flow of your second one but try it without the bars inside the letters, also try making the head of the r smaller.the first one is good but the bit on the y kills it
    jers- fresh as always, if thats an e on the end of the last one try to make it more similar to the first one or vice versa
    giz- i love your style, my favourite is the blue one on the third page. is that first one supposed to be an action figure? cause the joints look like the hips of an action figure
    riot- does that say sck? make all the letters the same size and simplify it
    liquid- your letters are pretty bad, stay simple but your fill skills are good, dont fall back on that though
     
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  18. Seeoner

    Seeoner Member

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  19. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    JERS! whats good homie. Shits lookin pretty fine.

    THRICE - Thats from like 3 or 4 months ago, howd you even find that?
     
  20. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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