like it astro like it.... and here is my tag wit da pencil...so whatcha think? [Broken External Image]:http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/849/dsc00009jz5.jpg
Astro-in the first one I'd ditch that A, it's overplayed and doesn't flow great with the rest, none the less great job. Vus-simple and nice, with something like that it looks best with a mop, get a flick of that and post. crits?
Ahem, have you tried using all capital letters? I'm not good myself with lowercase so try it out. Judge the tag to the side. [Broken External Image]:http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/block.jpg
Keep it proportionate, and ya i've got quite a few diff styles of all caps, tried to get some nice lowercase ones now.
yea thx m8ts... yo beyondureyes-it nice, i like the O and U looks cool about that whit mop. yea i have one for dripz...will try it out peace
HEMP; you have that simple style down IMO MOES; get that O to look a bit more tidy? AHEM; get that bottom bar on the E to flow into the M if you know what I mean? and define that M a bit more. ASTRO: definately the bottom one, just work on that R a little bit so the O flows with it. maybe work the leg on the R up to a higher point? NIZE; smaller flick GHOUL; I like it, that G needs working though. looks a little small VUS; not really into 3 letter names for writers.. but it's simple enough [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/1786/mayntainormf5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9494/oyzteraf2.jpg my giving crits to getting crits ratio is about 12:1.. I should change names to.. ignoredoner. CRITS PLEASE AND THANKS!
I love number 2.....they are both really good tho..i was a hard decision.... Id say if you were trying to perfect your tag to give up b/c both are fucking awesome..... A+ But i just like #2 better....
here are a few of my first tags. Kind of suck, but I think they are pretty good for my first ones. This one, the character would of been better, but cops showed up, so I didn't even get to touch it up. This one the lines are not the straight because of wind, and I was in a hurry to get it done before it started raining.
haha, what? where is there a dick? Yeah, I realized that I posted it in the wrong section, sorry about that.
well, in the second picture, the tag on the left. the N with extensions looks suspiciously much like a penis.
Astro your tags are both dope. I've been writing for almost a year and I hate my tags. You're only 2 months in and I don't see a single thing wrong with yours. Keep it up man.
^^^ thot i senced a bit of the female touch in the penmenship, the only thing id change is the "s" i mean its not bad i jus aint feelin how it flows in2 tha "a" but thats jus my personal opinion
Crits? Dap Lose all of your ad ons and go siple Also why is there a red pile of shit? med Looks pretty nice Lose the star on top move it to the side maybe and lose te swirley thing on top too Hemp Looks dope More drips next thime though Just kinda looks like the kinda tag that would look good with drips