bottom bumps rein- i would say go simpler, i see the most potential in the first and fourth ones, keep sketchin dohn- for ur peices dont try goin wild just yet, get some simps down. on the pictures, they all have potential, keep it up mass- illin, im really feelin that cloud. u down to exchange sometime?
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ahhh god damn..Its like i don't have the imagination to do bars. Iv read that guide haha...looks like ill keep going back to it for references. Is there any in-depth guide to bars?
Dohnjwelly Looks Liek U Spend More Time On Teh Characters Then On Ur Graff Either Way Dope Shit Man..i Would Say To Make Ur Structure Of Lteers Flow Much Better And Try Not To Add On Too Much Crazy Shit Everywere And Calm Down On The Color..
Dewster_OnE - im liking the fill a lot, and the overall sketch ~Star~ - work on simple letter structure more Leadpoisining - what aher said Mass Appeal - loving it, you have a really fresh and unique style my garbage [Broken External Image]:http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/208/imghp2.jpg
bump for crits. and thanks rasek, those sketches arent too bad. only things bothering me on the first sketch is on the K, the top right leg i think looks a little too long/wide. and same with the R, that top right leg(like on a K) you brought it out too long. make it shorter and i think it'll look better. also i think the way the bottom right legs of the K and R look kinda bad, specially the K's because it gets all fat.
negor, i only like the n. lasika? uhh maybe do more block letters? some quick freestyles. my friend was supposed to write nors but he kept his old name. Sorry bout the penis thing.
penfreestyle [Broken External Image]:http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/5894/58231877cz5.png mass throw a cloud behind all ur peaces or try 3d looks real fresh donald try a lowercase e
star-try using bars negor- it has potential but the o killed it 4 me now 4 my horrable attempt lol fuked up the k
Started about a week and a half ago, this is the only one i felt worth posting here. Any suggestions?