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which style should i run with?

 

This is a style im Workin on any Crits? IM NOT DONE I dont know what to do with the "A" And Ideas?



Meko- Lovin Color Schemes.

 

virus thats looking a whole lot better than anything ive seen from you keep working at it

meko i cant really see it its to blury try some simples and get some better picks

 

try goin straight up with the left bar on the a, and then slanted off to the right a nondominant right bar. keep your curves on the right.

 

didnt mean to double post

 

That's not too bad viruz.. keep working on it
Screamout, I always like your stuff man

something different, in pen, so it's a little sloppy since i couldn't erase
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tunka - the k and a dont seem to flow with the rest, the style of the "tun" part looks really aggressive where as the K and A just look squeezed in there because thats where there supposed to be lol. i duno if that makes any sence to you but hopefully you can pull something usefull out of this crit

mekosbc - bad picture quality but id be willing to but that under all that fuzz and colour is some poor letter structure, i could be wrong but id like to see some simps from you

sosviruz - that looks like a solid style your developing, keep working with it, ill crit more on it when its lookn closer to finished

zof - looking ill dude, looks a lot cleaner than some of the other stuff ive seen from you. but maybe thats just because i havent been here in a little while

 

Try bringing out the horizontal on the K and do something new with your A, other than that it is looking very fresh there.

Edit: on a second look, SOS that is looking VERY clean, Keep it going

 

just a little simple



reads M'cab, like "macab"

 

Thats pretty sick dude. So is Cabre pronounced like 'Cob' then? As in Macabre?

 

thanks and yeah, COB or CAB. and yeah like Macabre.

I'm sooo sick of people calling me KAYBER or KAHBRAY -_-


oh, good shit Zof.

 

That simple is haawt

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filled this

 

I'm really feeling the bottom tag, I like the piece too other then where the F and N overlap.
In my opinion they're just a little too hidden.

 

MORE

why haven't i seen this shit!? so much potential. (not saying your current isn't hot, this is just more of what im geared to. personal pref.)

 

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Last one is for a homie...

 

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Crits are welcome...

 

Hahah wow..this shits getting mixed reactions some call it lazy style others say its unfinished

Its just an outline in a different colour thats all , im bored of doing thick black outlines they take forever
and HOT DAMNNNN SKUZ THATS TEH REAL SHIT NAGGI

 

i wasn't tryna bite

 

this is a few months old but my girl just sent me the pic, im on the left, shes Muter.
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