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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  2. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    bumppin to see if i can get a few more crits!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    rsaken-yours look pretty good man! especially the colors...i would recommend though to try to keep all of your letters even across the page, it makes everything look organized neat (believe me, it helps)
    med-looks even better bro..especially the S, very creative. i like how you used 2 dif mediums to, helps make the letters stand more..looks like your doing a half-shadow half-3D though. if you make on or the other as real as possibe it has a huge affect on your work
    and ill admit, the arrows ARE a little random, BUT it does kinda give it a little oldschool styled look(im my opinion). sounds cliche but does look pretty 90s LA
     
  3. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Syerf- like the Green force feild around it. It's nice But the Blue with the silver Im really not feelin.
     
  4. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    dope but i do think it is a lil busy,
    i cant tell if its too much green on green,
    or the squigily highlights, normaly there dope but they seem to confuse my eyes if ya get me.....

    but i deff think you should do another one jus toned down a lil
     
  5. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    thnx man! much appriciated
    yeh i was kinda expirementing, the solid blue through it looked way to plain:(
    that was my first sketch in like a few months that i got to color in, because i dont have any prismas or decos yet myself:(
    what are the thoughts on letter structure and flow?
     
  6. CaseyJonesJR

    CaseyJonesJR Senior Member

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    i like that half way crook....and your marlboros
     
  7. Waze

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    k thanks man ima get baring :D
     
  8. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    keane u have nice fills and good letters i like your stuff
    syerf thts preety ill i like the top one more
    fube i like it it looks a lill crazy though
    sexwithoutcondoms i like your throwie
     
  9. sheltr

    sheltr Senior Member

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    bump tha fishy
    btw ket is taken brejin^^^^
     
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  10. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    thnx man:)
    both a little sloppy though, and very outdated...ill have better stuff comin when my prismas arrive
    lookin good man, color that shit!
    and i noticed that some of your stuff in a few places is a tad uneven, and the bar methode will help you with that dramatically!
    for example, on the T, you have the bottom vertical line meeting with the cross at the top, and a small portion popping at the top-that top part doesnt align quite with the bottom-bar method will fix that easy
    hope that made sense, and helped lol
     
  11. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    ya im jst messen around with stuff it says kei not ket lol i gotta work on making it look like and i
    i did tht with barely any light lol
    thnks for the crit i get wht u mean
     
  12. antere07

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  13. Flash_One

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  14. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    haha mybad
    most def...
    and yes, i recommend you add a little light to the concoction, it helps clear things up a bit

    flash one-yeeehhh booiii
    i like
    looks like you have some random block at the bottom left though..whats up with that?
    def lookin fresh though
     
  15. IlikePie

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    Blahh... Rasek exchange, totally fucked the E and I dunno how he fits 5 letters per page...
     
  16. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Flash- Work on your bar, I recconmend that you dont even start with color unitll you have your sketching down just beacuse its a waste of you marker. But thier your markers. :p Just sketch it and put the sketch up here then you can get crits also.(What I did, it helps) Then with your bars, you need to work on your dominate bar. Look at Abek he follow his dominate bar pretty good. Just keep it up tho.

    IlikePie- Man Nice. You shit is clean, (Like always) Like the the letter teeth.

    antere- Loos the arrows, cause they look out of line... You "B" Is a little skinny. But You can flow with your bars which is good. Keep it up man.

    Kroc- That look very sloopy, you need to do more similar need and your letter structure is off. Work on goin similar.

    (New Style on the way guys!!)
     
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  17. ...Syerf

    ...Syerf Senior Member

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    lolz, i like how you still got the K on the page
    if you keep your letters even and the same size, it might look a little neater, but idk...just an idea
    colorz? if your gonna put some colors on, grab a flick i wanna see:D
    i got flix in the sticker thread if anyone whats to shead some crits on those..thnx
     
  18. nero112

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    kroc way back to the simples please ...abek nice although force field and purple killed it horribly
     
  19. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    The Purple maybe couldve been drawn a different way, but im diggin the color itself with the dull white and black.
     
  20. the end

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    MS - i think youre tryin to hard on that one... tone done the letters and actualy make LETTERS