ms - stick to simples gizurd - in my opinion it would look better without the weird lookn underline, the R is lookn a little off too. you should try making the leg of the R go around to look kind of like a mirror of your G, i think that would look ill, but once again just my opinion
gizurd , what scream out said , and maybe spread it out a bit more, either way it looks ill keep it up
yo gizurd. really feeling that style. its unique and has mad potential. heres a simple i did today. i dont know, kinda shitty but you guys all said i should stick to simples. i fucked up the background big time though dammit.
My Simp steeze im working on... Yeah...Started with the R and didnt leave enough room for the O. As im sure you were all smart enough to figure out. GIZURD - Nice to see you branchin out man. Shits got potential. MEKO - Your shit had been progressively better. Keep it up. PIE - Fresh, just not diggin the "e" SAEK - Just keep sketchin man. Itll come.
it lookz good jammer, it could use some highlights and a rap color... the 3d is a lil off in some places.... but over all itz ight
jammer-try some different colors do you have anything different from just sharpies, if thats what they are? check out some of the satin sharpie colors, they are wicked! i used them on some stickers(check the stickers thread, click pictures forum) and they look like prismas you can buy them at most any store, i highly recommend them your 3D looks pretty good though some lines arent quite parallel, but thats something that wont come perfect right off the bat keep rockin it brotha
yeah they're sharpies lol the thin ones.. prismas are excellent but expensive, you gotta use what you got right
First one's A needs some more bend to it, and the second one's A is squashed, the R's kick has too many extensions. But I'm really feelin' the first one, a lot.
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unless your the GASM from detroit you should change your name but other than that youve got flow and your bars are dope
gasm - thats pretty good man i just think the bars on the M that point inwards should be thicker, maybe its just me caer - all looking pretty good but i think your R's are holding you back, they arent really as strong as your other letters, not really feeling the A in the second one either looks too boring compared to the other letters. orah - liking the simples dude, the RA in the second on looks hella rasek'y though haha. not saying its a bite as the letters are pretty generic but when i saw it i had to look back at the screen name as i thought maybe rasek was doing an exchange for someone haha. soer - definatley got potential, maybe connect the right part of the R to the spine if you get what i mean and draw the O instead of a bomb. E is pretty hot thoughhhhh ms - i think ive seen some of your other tuff and it wasnt as horrid as that haha. no beef just stick to simps for now. saek - your on the right track, as in your letters arent to horribly structured but maybe try using bars, it will get your letters looking alot better. [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8581/jul10194eo0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6586/jul10195me9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/858/jul10196fe9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2219/jul10193wq2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2020/jul10192ld9.jpg
The Stuff people post up now is lookin good. Fonone- I dont like the last one choice of color for the force feild. That just me/ Clout- Nice Simps/
^^^SOS- I'm pretty sure that you are biting Tezer, kid. I'm just too lazy to find the sketch. mmm, my man, G's be lookin' sexy.