also id say try and squash your letters together a bit more, having it so drawn out it kinda loses style in a big way. besides that its a good start.
Man I told myself I wouldn't post here until I knew I didn't suck the most... well whatever. Here's one from a while back, it's just a quick sketch of course but I personally like how it turned out... sort of. Suggestions? http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8936/0625080006azu4.jpg (Linked for size)
keep you n like the n in the second one, and your tag is nice and simple so you could try and make it so it goes from smaller to bigger and it would probably look good. or the other way around zombie- keep practicing for a long time =/
Hah that sounds about right... you think I can get anything a little more constructive though? I mean I was thinking I should probably tone down on the extras... take off the quotes, I already don't do the dumb halo. And the M is a lot straighter on more recent tags of mine, so yeah. Other than that, what can I do to make this style look a little better? Also @ thatguy: I like the second one, it's nice and simple
ditch the extension on the M fix the E, its angled too much and looks like an L or V go simple then work on flow from there
yeah I guess that's best... I have plenty of the simpler handstyles I do but I wanted to see if I could pull off something more intricate. Thanks though, I guess I'll keep practicing... hah.
me and sc zombie are pretty new at this stuff ,me and him usually go and tear up everything but let me know if there is anything that i can do to this to make it look more proffesional plus i can this that in under 15 seconds [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8691/rogkp3.jpg
15 seconds is pretty long if your talking about just the tag. you s is very typical, and the extension on the L doesn't quite fit, as well as the random quotes in the s. work on it more
lose the little thingies in the S your not from philly nor are you writing gang graffiti haha. youve obviously got a clean handstyle though. id reccomend making all your letters same size and just going with it from there. post up your results, im intrigued now.
Allright I couldn't find any flicks of this style I was looking for so I just kind of wrote it down on the closest sheet of paper with the closest marker so yeah the letters aren't perfect. I usually make them all the same height, the arch of the M is all weird on this one, and my right quote mark kinda got cramped because I drew the diamond thing first... so aside from all that stuff let me know, is it any good? [Broken External Image]:http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/7720/bjhz8.png If not tell me how to make it a better, because this tag is one fast, uninterrupted line and it's a nice simple thing to put up in a hurry. EDIT: Sweet location, thatguy!