aa man u have too many turns and angles in there it looks kinda liek some one bent a pole a few times and then added letters try to make the stright... also there no need for all the add ons... a lil tip DROP the arrow the arrow died alonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng time ago.. unless u have the old school style its hard to pull it off proper.. one last thing DONT over lap your letters it looks cheesey... hope it helped

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number12 hot shit... keep it up
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i posted this in a few other threads so why not post it here

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stickers slanted i swear..
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... yea i just relized i speled "tide" like "tied" so yea im stupid

 

thats with pen? real dope, hand styles are to of coarse, i just sometimes forget that the drips are man made...

 

AA, its pretty cool. but listen to wut gesus said. i like it tho.

 

i'm mos def not feelin those stickers work on it. maybe some color and make the character bigger

 

nuthin like ges but u no

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first one is for some broad u no how it is, hard bein so damn skilled AND sexy

 

work on it

and coo is gesus to 'work on it'? blahh

 

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nice man but it looks ms-paintish
maybe it is

 

hahaha it does look a little ms paintish but its sooooooo hot

 

im sorry gesus, but i think you got a bit to happy about sbers work...

 

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That's fuckin hot! I don't like how the I goes over the S though...But its Fresh

 

dope nemis, and what do you mean how the I goes over the S?...how would you of done it?

 

It's a wallpaper i did, it's a testicule dude:
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narc thats balls


...or ball?







just joking

 

nuttin special.... a sketch i did for a homies sketch book...
i was too busy so i just did that and added the shit at the bottom and
all that shit... looks bad now at another look
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and a sketch im workin on... i just gotta work on my shading and how
im gonna shade it...
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thats pretty good dude. i like it. but the black in the background...i don't really like. i dunno...its the spikes that trip me out. but its a good peice dude.

 

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looks real fresh slob i like it