I didn't directly call him a biter. I just think there are certain similarities between the 2 pieces that are a bit suss. Only because as soon as I saw the sketch, the BABY panel came to mind straight away.

None the less. I dig the style.

 

there look similar because there have similar names
and there boot very simple letter styles i get what you being talking about

 

Jares- Fresh shit
elm- clean it up a little and make the bar width the same and it will be on point.
Pakz- letters look pretty solid, with some tweeking in will be good.
geya- i think if you used less bars in the A it would flow better, and maybe a thicker outline.
keane- always fresh.

 

Rsakens I dig your style man, simples are dope.

Im unsure which of the two styles I like....
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00-made-00
cheers man =]

i am felling the r in all of does sketches the E in the 1st & 3th sketch is striate too
dont like any off the T try to create them from 2 bars only don't attach does bars coming from the top that dosent flow to well with rest of the piece

2nd sketch the h is the best letter in there clean simple style the u is to small compare too the other letters have nothing against your r =] same story here goes for the T

 

Hert - letters are good, but there is some one who writes hert already and they have a pretty big name if you know what i mean.
Keane - On the top of your last E the little chunk looks like it shouldn't be there.

 

Different country + theres only a certain amount of letter combinations possible.

But yeah, I know what you mean

 

hert..nice letters
rsakens - i dunno what to think about it overall..nice use of your bars though
baby - i like the train
geya - i would smooth out some of those bars a bit..diggin the 3d though

heres some simple shit

 

The R's in those pieces look pretty nice but the rest is nasty. Like the E and the T have really bad structure especially in the second piece.

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The outline for this looked nice but I ruined it with the grey inside outline.

I preferred this one:

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NY mets colours.

 

yeah fell you man that kinda ruins the top bar of the E
dit the same on the k peaty useless =/

raby i am felling the 2nd one nice letters mostly like the r dope sketch man
not feeling does cracks there look kinda randomly like you dint put much effort in them

 

i think my letters get worse as they go along, did the p sludgely and then thought i might as well go for some other letters

irec- i like that new style and if you want the teeth on the c to be noticed you might want to make them a bit bigger
raby- i prefer the bottom one as well and i actually thought that b was a shit capital b, also their is only one of them extensions on the whole piece if you wanna put them in make sure that its not just one on their own
rite- i completely agree with raby, your r's are alot better than your other letters, did you just swap from another name with an r in? i like seeing style's like that pulled off well but the only letter thats good is the r's and maybe the e in the first one. keep working on that though i wanna see it develop
joga- its pretty simple, just connect all the bars, dont have somne seperated by black line and take out all the extensions like the one on the a, also try doing some thicker bar simples

 

lose the drips and shit

 

Joga: Pretty cool.
Project Link: I really like the 2nd one.

I still be tryin'......having all of the trouble in the world with my L's and M's

 

Um...huh?

iRek- I think that style would look better with a K, I mean after all R's and K's are pretty close to the same.
ELM - Did you do the alphabet yet? Dont bend your bars quite yet. You've got to get proportions and widths and all the small but crutial stuff down first before you start trying to make funky letters.

 

I hate the R. The proportions are off...just postin for talkin.



Elm - What you do is draw. Maybe focus on one letter in your name, try to make something you really like. Then make the other letters flow with it. Once you get one letter down, its just a matter of time until the others follow suit. Dont let it get you down. You cant rush good art man. Everything comes in time.

 

Clout: Thats pretty Ill. Great colors. The R looks fine.

I go through paper after paper, but Imma still keep on keepin on with this. NOTE: THIS IS A QUICK DRAWING TO SHOW THE STYLE I AM TRYING TO DEVELOP.

IGNORE THE L.......the middle bar in the E is crazy too. Sorry about the horrible picture.

 

ay bro.
that M had alot of potential and shit.
but dont bend your letters so hard. thicken up your letters a bit. take up more of the paper or try to do it letter by letter.

l......l<===thickness of your letters.
l.................l<===== make them around this thick.



dont change it from thick to skinny either.
get your simples.

 

old style.....crits??
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Yeah Elm...that M is the best letter you've drawn yet. I did a quick sketch just trying to show you how you can mold your other letters around that M.


Listen to Riot, you should be taking up more space on the page. It just helps with the structure. When its that small the proportions can be very easily distorted. And you should be going through page after page, I went through about 50 one day just on handies. Its just the little things that help.