Make the top right of the s not have such a big bump. Kinda looks like "mayo"

 

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bah.. trying something new crtis

 

dont worry about getting a one line at this point^

 

bad-yo thats pretty kool...are they stickers lol..i like the colors and every thing man nice work..work on the s tho bro..
yo thrice-i like it man its pretty clean add some trim or fill to it tho man..
TURKEY-pretty basic...but its good bro..work on the s.
thatguy-yo i dont even no what it is man its a little sloppy..
AND FINALLY......-bak- yo what virus is sayin is use peoples work as an example, dont coppy.. but just as a reffrence, an work up ur own style..cuz it looks like u are new at the wwhole graffiti thing....but nice clown

 

mm yeh they are lol wud it be better if i lose the lil bump and made it lyk symmetrical?

 

Working with the e

oene
Start over

maso lose the lump off your s and dn't curve your o so much.

 

New Style. Crit please?

 

Crits?
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yo yarbles the e lookz better

 

408 bomber 1st lose the shine marks and 2nd make the bump on ur n less high it looks like an h

 

YO OENE THIS IS HOW I WOULD DO UR NAME IN A ONE LINER...

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yo duz any 1 want to have a throwie battle...word i think would be kool to do is BAM....but it doesnt mater i jus dont no how to post..

 

Link I'll have one with you but................. Can you give me some time, cause Im finshing some stuff up, with Ante, and Meko.

 

ya bro deff... but what r u doin? do i have time to get in on it...is it a battle

 

found this on streetgreed.2ksite.com

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i can dig that, its relatively clean and the flows alright

 

mhm you think so i actly hate this one i aren't a bomber ya know i can do pieces and shit but throws aren't my thing =/ but thanks anyways for the crit mate

 

Keane that's fresh.

Does have a piece feel to it though yeah. Also, your tag is awesome dude, sick.