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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    A Too tell the Truth that A is lookin good but I can see the rest of them beaucse it is too light.
     
  2. thebaconator

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    sarto - not feelin the little leg on the r and the little extension on the top of the s
    sketch- i like how the letter flow alot


    ai140.photobucket.com_albums_r13_onedayafter3_DSC02838.jpg
    crits welcome
     
  3. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Sketch- your on the Right Track I suggjest you use Str8 letters, Like the ones from the Keyboard.

    Bacon- Dude, do what Sketch is doin.. Use bars bro.
     
  4. sketchthescene

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    okay, Ill whip something up and come back to this one a later date.

    ps the dark night was seriously awsome, man i like movies alot, and respect the old shit, but you cannot compare the old batman movies too todays version's eg. begins/darknight
     
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  5. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    its not a bite of rasek, its a simple, and rasek does simples too
     
  6. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    bump...

    i like it, but the left side of it (the RA) seems like it has more addons/extensions/whatever than the SEK.

    meh, lookin good
     
  7. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    lol dont worry about it. Man. Like yo Stlye Ace.

    Rasek- You R has all the exstions but your a dosent.
     
  8. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    give crits if your expecting to get any.
     
  9. HëRbN

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  12. fromthegrave

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  14. merp13

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    ok well im new to this but i will post some of my stuff.
    i write merp13 or merper.
    i still consider myself a toy so i will post here.

    ai96.photobucket.com_albums_l184_nath2006_DSCF0215.jpg
    ai96.photobucket.com_albums_l184_nath2006_DSCF0217.jpg
    ai96.photobucket.com_albums_l184_nath2006_DSCF0218.jpg
    ai96.photobucket.com_albums_l184_nath2006_DSCF0220.jpg
    i will post some more soon .
    please give critz because i would like to know how i could improve ect... but i know that to recive critz you have to give them so ...

    @fromthegrave = i like the letters cool fill too ... no so sure about the things coming out from the e
    @rsakens = i love all them pieces they are so clean and fresh.
    great colours and fills too. nice work
    @HëRbN = not bad but i really dont like all the exstentions and shit... you should keep it more simple. cool character though.
    @thebaconator = not really feeling it bro.. forget about all the lines and shit in your letters go more
     
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  15. BombingSciences Bitch

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    Have you not listened to a word people have said to you? This is at least the third time I've had to tell you, go simpler.

    Video - Try use bars of equal size for now.

    Ares - That's tight, keep it up man.
     
  16. DRiPTooL

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  17. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    To Drip- I like your old name better. Villan is a lil too long for me. Man but you are on the right track Just keep practicing thoses bars. Try to make the 2 "V" Bars Squeez together a lil more
     
  18. DRiPTooL

    DRiPTooL Senior Member

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    ok i was told that drip was over used
     
  19. PureSole

    PureSole Elite Member

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    Merp, Welcome to BS and those are okay, but go simplier and don't do any crazy extensions out of nowhere (like the M) (also the R in the second picture). Give your M more structure too

    Drip, go with what you like better, but yea, I seen drip in a few places. Good start, now try to see how you can make the letters flow into each other, and what you can do as far as extensions, add ons, etc.
     
  20. DRiPTooL

    DRiPTooL Senior Member

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    ok ill try to do that