drives me insane when you look at the outline of a throwy right when your'e done and at the start is already fading hate it
ze only thing i dont like about rusto is that all dem caps make them leak. except for rusto fatcaps. yarbles yer shit is lookin sik. why u still in the toy forums? lucifer- yeah this thread is for any kinna throwie--paper or wall or w/e. ohsnap- sik throwie, just fucked up the shadow, imho.
went a bit ott on the bumps, but i think the c and s look ok, its not my normal throwie but i just sprung to mind, im mainly looking for crits on the p and o edit:i just looked at this again and i really dont like it started messing with my throwie again aekz- youre getting better every time but you might want to start practicing with all your letters, otherwise your gonna have a nice a and e and a crap k and z. i would suggest taking off the tumour like lump on the a and squareing off the top like the e, other than that youre progressing nicely acre- i would suggest putting dots or some kind of whole in your letters to make them more distuinguishable, i like that throwie just dont overlap the bottom of the onto the r snap- your o,h,s and n are good, personally i think that 1. your throwie looked alot better on paper and it hasent transfered over well, keep practicing with paint 2. the a has sacrificed too much just for flow, i think you should take out the sticky out bit and try it on an upper case a because that would flow so much better 3. the p is very plain compared to the rest of your letters, also try to make sure your throwie doesnt curve downwards and i think you can tell the shadow is off rozwell- does that say aoe? anyway, ohsnaps advice is exactly what you should do and dont bother painting until youre throwies at least half decent, you dont need to paint right now
Ae Full throw toned down the a squared out the e more, the k is still fucking with me though Fuck schools got me burnt out :/ pocs the gold white one's got potential the other one maybe lose one of the bumps of the c and s
Shie-ster - fresh style. i really like it. just be carefull with your 3d.. like in the last pic on the top of the E. i dont think that 3d should be that present... nice work.
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You can hit the books for a while before painting illegal. Seriously, work it really well on paper first.
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what ive been doing for throwys lately [Broken External Image]:http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4255/phone0004gj6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2791/phone0005hb4.jpg smile_- add more style to itt, props for not trying to start off real complex though RINS- get your throwy looking at least decent before you go putting it up everywhere, please
first-ever post. [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7580/img0571jp0.th.jpg comments and crits. very welcome, tell me how i fucked up my sketch
ok i dont like the eyes try and make them more hardcore and the eyebrow has got to go the colers are nice and if you could put a kik ass outline around it it would look legit.
paper this time [Broken External Image]:http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/4857/71628764tm5.jpg @ 'caution+spontaneity'; Your coloring looks good, but if I were you I'd probably make the letters all the same size and thickness.
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