hell nah that aint a dope spot...thats under a little bayou where no one can see...hahahawork on ur letters....does it say FAYS???
can control needs work..the last one shows some progress..do your outline right on top of your other lines...that way your fill wont be showing through the outline and making it look tacky
irek-the second bomb is the best, but would be better if the bottom bar on the e was lowered the fill was done with a roller, started running out of paint, thus the little e. hah
your fill is showing through your outline on that last flick..thats one thing..it also seem slike youre holding the can in the same place for too long during your fill
That looks like a nice place, I would have saved it for a piece, or atleast did it with spray paint, I can spot a few mistakes as well, the shading in the O shouldnt go all the way to the bottom because it doesnt with your D, the shading on the P and E is to big, the white outline should be that width around the whole thing, gets way to small on the inside of the E...Made a good place to tag I guess and the red outline under the round part of the P gets big for no reason...Just a few things to work on.
^^^^^ also if you ganna do shading inside the letters you gotta do shading on the out side of the letters too
yeah the perspective is pretty off, i should of taken the black back before the letters. but at the time all i had was scrap. so i was just workin with what i had. i dont even know what the red depth under the p was about.ha thanks for your input.ill work on it.
Other then the stuff that everyone else is suggesting, I'd work on your 3d, or shadow what ever that is. Nice work on the roller fill. I Want to see the other peaces that are in that flick from further away. If your ever back down there get some flicks of the rest of the peaces.
word. here's my first attempt at anything larger than a throw. i know the t's shit and the fills iffy. crits appreciated.
Maybe this is just my bitchyness, but my biggest problem with it is the swirl in the middle of the circle. Also keep your bars more even, Even in bubble peaces like that you've got to make sure there atleast close to the same size. ... Again just my opinion.
critz plz! The Y is bigger then the rest of the letters, I always end up doing that to one of the letters though and im not sure why, Any suggestions to fixing that would be appreciated. I wanted to do a glow, but i ran out of paint. Also the color scheme is horrible. anybody have any other things to say about it? Ps srry about the double post.
I don't remember asking for a critique of what I thought about the peace. Unless your the person that did the peace. And i mean the sections or "bars" that make up the letters. http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185 Pic taken from the above link