mass-nice idea,(not the name,the H),finish it?what are you waiting for,go and finish it,editroblem solved lol shamee-dope,what does it say? pathos-simples simples simples stim-i feel sick now ante-feeling the bars viruz-e looks too shakey seyar-nice freestyle,work on the hands thoough
Fuckin scanner really likes to highlight my fuck ups. Anyway i know its rough i gotta re-work it but figured i might as well put it up n get some crits. [Broken External Image]:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d57/XXXylophone/claz1.jpg
Yea Thank Guys I see what you mean. With the "E" Like that was my Frist Pic in while so my hand was sooo un steady.. But Its a new steez so Hey Im going to work on it after I finish doing something with Meko and I'll post it up.
lol had somethin happen tonite that made a lot of shit hit home!! neway ppl think way too much bout owt others think, they care more bout 'crits' than how they work looks.. do ya own shit, graff is bout being uniqe!!! if ur shit, practice. but yeh im not gona be in contact with el family frm now on so probs wont be online, back to iraq on sunday anyway.. i hope to get flicks on somehow though.. take care, to the few who know me... SEYER hot as fuck, lovin use of bars, aswell. proof it works... MASS il be honest, iv alway looked at ur shit different... and ONLY JUST NOW realise thats a good thing...mate ur shit is different, and that means some ppl wont like it but u know what?? thats what ur trying for!!1 means ppl will notice u mate. and u seem to be in it for the long term. keep at it pal...
Nemz ... you do know its Ras right ? ... you was always good help cheers .. im looking to join the forces one day .. maybe one day well meet up in the middle of World War 4 and say fuck this lets go BOMBING .. hahah get it ? yeah.
i do indeed pal.. i remember i used to rip u bout ur shit, but hell uv improved... just wanted t say wat i thought lol. u should mate. best decision i ever made was joinin the army... except u wont have much time for writing.... lol. take it easy bruv
word check out ma new mascot [Broken External Image]:http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0002-11.jpg "Spitin hot fire like a dragon" Dragon this is my old one [Broken External Image]:http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0009-1-1.jpgthe "report hamster abuse" Hamster framin it-not feeling it, what does it say? Yarbles-also not feeling it, the e doesn't seem to fit in with the other letters
yarbles - The A is way off, fix the proportions bizar - That's fucking awesome, the right foot looks a little off. Crits on my A?
bump for some crits on the letters thrice- that a looks pretty good, the middle bar needs to be thickend up just a bit bizar- fresh, just work on the wings there seems to be alot of negros in here not crittin for some reason. just remember the rules, give crits to get crits
Drew this before any of you guys critted me Fucked up the s :/ Working out my proportions and everything I think what makes the e look wierd is the notches so I'll tkae those out. Sayer looks good I like it Thrice push in the legs of you a more it's too wide Bizar lovin that dragon
Yarbles-Theres this dope writer meks in my area im not sure if your near by or anything but that name is pretty close and make the bars on A and S thinner to fit in with the rest of the letters
I usually rock a z and not an s So yeah. That and I'm no where near any dope writers :/ Suburbs suck balls.
View attachment 399228 View attachment 399229 these are two sketches i did and wanted to get some crits on so i could chamge them before i started with markers sayer-stuff looks dope and i love the dragon work on the wings though