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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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  2. Hoaks

    Hoaks Member

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    BIGel, looking good, make the bottom half of the E a bit wider / longer, looks a bit off, but you don't see it around, and different is good, so.
    And I know you're a mod and all, but try and give some crits, please? ;)
     
  3. lolumad?

    lolumad? Senior Member

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    oak, i think the hollow is tight. only thing i would do is just try and do something really really little with the o just so that it's not simple as fuck.
     
  4. crevette

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    oak - make that a an a.

    Bigel - It's nice but that e is weird and so is the z before it. Blacken that little triangular part to the right of the emebbe.

    Hoaks - nice s and h can't really catch that last letter. The connecting bar in the H make it less tilted mebbe, like perpendicular to the H's legs.

    i did kinda of a weird style. a still look like an a? I need new markers.

    ai318.photobucket.com_albums_mm413_kurumaebi_scan0006.jpg

    crits i what i need, thanks.
     
  5. Nesk1

    Nesk1 Senior Member

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    Haha, it's an exclamation mark, looks like he'll have to make it more legible, I'd say pas don't bend the P on the left hand side, if you get what I mean.
     
  6. Tonberry

    Tonberry Senior Member

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    Oak, I like it. The only thing I'd change is the simplicity of the O Do something with it, don't just make it a plain oval or circle. Otherwise, I like it.
     
  7. TESTER

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  8. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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  9. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    Oak that's sick. Love the K.
     
  10. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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    yo beef ur gettin up..the force is a lil sloppy... but it lookz ight...
     
  11. Sans

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  12. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    ai35.tinypic.com_qozs5v.jpg


    Done for an exchange. Crits on the letters, not on the shadow, please.

    Nerve- That second throwie is decent, the arrows need to go though, in my opinion. I dig that V, though
     
  13. -Zeal-

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  15. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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    zeal I did that shit soo fast if it lookjs rugged it cause the spot was heaty
     
  16. -Zeal-

    -Zeal- Senior Member

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    yea i understand i still think its good
     
  17. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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  18. Nesk1

    Nesk1 Senior Member

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    Oak, gotta say, not feeling this one as much go back to the a and o that you posted before imo, it's all good though.
     
  19. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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    Thanks for the critz heres a different one ai262.photobucket.com_albums_ii104_beefisforburgers_HPIM0761.jpg
     
  20. dj3hac

    dj3hac Senior Member

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    Oak I like how you are getting up, If it were me, I'd try to make my letters more like cute animals (seriously) sometimes it's nice to see some lighter shit. A lot of stuff looks to 'mean' if you know what I mean. I'm not hating on THAT particular style, but its just beginning to become the norm.