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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    sick shit mr paranoid cat =]
     
  2. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    evade- i like it. stuffs nice
    sense- i like the sigs but you gotta work on making the other stuff cleaner

    another sketch i did. didnt have an eraser on me so its kinda sloppy
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  3. white

    white Senior Member

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    info - like it but i think the bend in you N is a little overdone
    sense - your shadow needs work hardcore
    sly - agreed dont use "graffiti creator" websites, like i told you earlier, just use bars and write you name over and over again and style will come with time
    evade - sick drawings
    rake - i would say work on your 3D a little more, change up your handy
     
  4. CakeWalk99

    CakeWalk99 Senior Member

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  5. disclaim

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    i reckon u shld go simple n lose those extensions
     
  6. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    Cake- go much simpler. Your bars don't have a consistent thickness, and as a whole, there is no flow whatsoever.

    Rake- maybe bend your K and E a bit more so that they match the bending of the R and A. The K could use a bit of tweaking also. Make the tops of the letters have a consistent angle, if that makes sense to you. The handy could use some work also. You're def headed in the right direction...

    Evade- Pretty hot stuff there. I'm really feelin' the shading on those.

    Shook- See Speedy's post. I second this motion

    Sex- Lookin' good as usual. No offense, but do you ever make anything other than throws? Just curious.

    Sense- Your 3d is WAY off. Also, try to make it look cleaner next time. Your letters aren't horrible, but making it look that sketchy really doesn't help...

    Info- Lookin' good. I'm really feelin' the I. Very nice.
     
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  7. Rooftop Resident

    Rooftop Resident Senior Member

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    crits?

    Alright, so here's an older sketch and some more simple shit since I was told to go more simple...
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    And here are a few throw ups...
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  8. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    the bottom of the Y looks a little fat but thats dope
     
  9. +Hoodwigga

    +Hoodwigga Senior Member

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    yeah it looks a lil wack on paper but thats dope painted
    fix the hand tho it really doesnt fit with your throw
     
  10. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    anoy is pretty good
     
  11. drugsfromthebrain

    drugsfromthebrain New Member

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  12. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    that 2nd of with that prisma is too dope, go to the bigboy thread man
     
  13. sanrtizer

    sanrtizer Senior Member

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  14. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    dope letters, i like how you cover up just about all the deadspace.

    the symmetry is ill too.
     
  15. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    possible name change idk.
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    other shit
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  16. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    You have those throws down to a fine art, sex. :)
     
  17. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    fo sho.
    those throws are tight.
    and eryx, the pieces are ill, but the characters and handstyles could use some work.
     
  18. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    fre fre ehe eh freeesh
     
  19. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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  20. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    those throws, especially the orange one... are fuckin boss..

    drugs... so fresh and so clean clean

    rooftop, i would say, stay away from the extensions.

    skeetz- your right, it is sloppy all the letters are all different sizes, and its almost like they all have a dif style.

    i like te characters evasion.

    after a brief hiatus
    drew this in class, didn't have time to do the E before class ended,, and when i picked it up again i spaced the style and fucked up the E.
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