CRITS PLEASE

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the last one it started to piss pour when i found the poor old door.

 

it looks decent until you add the C.
and your fills are crappy. especially that last one.
slow down. i'm sure you aren't being rushed at any of those spots.
add drop shadow, force field.
and for god's sake, try something new.

i've been seeing the same backwards 2 letter throw from you for like a year.
do some straight letters or something.

 

wurd thnx for the crits.. and yea ive been doin the same throw for a year now but its became a lot better from 2K7 but im workin on str8s but i need to invest in CAPS stock tips SUCK.

youll be seein more hopefully in the next week.

 

word. im glad you didn't take my crits as an insult, cause they weren't meant to be.
do your thing.

 

hahahah u only say that cuz i tend to chrip back or wat not right haha... naah i know what a good crit is n a bad crit was deff not what you gave.

thnx again and stay up
oneevil.

 

i think that throw would look better if you didnt do it backwards all the time. it has improved alot for sure though, keep doin ur thang. definately throw a outline on it, it will make it look 10x cleaner

 

crits

 

wurd yo thnx... i do it backwards cuz i think it looks better then a frontward oneliner ya kno...iunno its just stuck to me i guess...


and the dude above me.. .nice throw.. keep doin wat u do.

 

is that SO or yo like the hand says, if its SO than its straight.
here is a throw of mine
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and here is a piece(fucked up on the R tho, probably got a lil carried away rollin n all)
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and a dumpster mop hand
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not feelin the hand, but the throw is dope

 

define the i on the throw more

 

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looking god man .

 

Clean cuts and nice fill...
Why did you do a handstyle right in the middle of your piece though??

 

his right ^
why did you ??

 

Its so and the hand is a u and a p for SOUP.
Blunt that tdot?

 

rsakens i kind of hate you.... but only cause your letters are fresh and steezy and your lines and fills are cleaner that Mr cleans bald shiny ass head.

 

SARTO work on your S shape a bit.
i thought it was JARTO at first