those aren't tags. those would be throws.
a tag would be your signature above the second throw.
work on your letters more before adding anything like quotes or asterisks or arrows.
get a phone book and a sharpie and go to town.
I've filled many many phonebooks just practicing tags

 

ok

n that rezn tag wasnt really suppoed b there

 

started over with basics

 

Bottom right is best in my opinion. I like the D and E. R and K could use a little spice, though.

 

im assuming your talkn bout the orange one. ill do some more n see how it goes

 

For resp added a little er to the end hah
Sorry it took so long

 

yarbles, those are pretty decent. Error one, in anwser to your question, hes toy.

Anyway some oldish tags with a mop and a new one ive been working on. crits?
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bump for crits

 

cream- looks good just change the bottom part of the c so it will go better with the rest of the tag.
sage- i like it except the extensoin on the n, and the star looks odd for some reason.

 

Bump so resp'll see

cream make your letters less edgy and move them in closer try to kill some of that dead space

sage your first s looks like a j or a t or somethin

 

I really like the skaer tags. they look really good.

the cream could have a lot of potential..just keep barely tweaking those letters for a minute.

 

just stopped in to say aeks or whatever he writes now is improving very very well

on point

 

Thanks alot guys

stonk I think the tride is yours right?
Or maybe I remember wrong
Either way it looks nice

 

Dope. Make that R the same size as all the other.

 

Yarbles- I dig it, minus the slash through the S.

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I can't get this shit straight on paper

 

im not feeling your e this time around

 

zarone - Looken good jus fix the R on the last one (on paper) make it the same size as the rest of your letters
Cream- Maybe make the bottom part of the C be the underline? Im not sure.

New name. New tags. "pewl"

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Crappy quality cellphone pics :\

 

^^^ that looks like cursive. simpler.
looks like youre trying too hard to make everything flow together bigblue.
feeling it zar, simple yet classy.

fuck camera phones.