[Broken External Image]:http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g315/mocantdance/sent21.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g315/mocantdance/sent2.jpg first time writing sent! tear them to shreds
here's mine...i write UTRIP (it means pulse or beat in my language) [Broken External Image]:http://www4.slikomat.com/08/1011/9xb-DSC036.jpg lemme know what needs to be fixed or just post sum tips
Yeah cus the shit we've seen from you is twenty times better right? Fuck off Niner sorry bud just not feeling it The e's just look like two loops the g is good but the p just dosn't look like a p You've got the letters down but the way your executing them isn't right utrip don't cross the letters with your r sent keep everything on the same level let the bottoms hit the same point for each letter same thing with the top try something different with your s and lose the star, lose the exlamation point too it seems like toys do it alot and it just dosn't look good. lose that double underline too and then move your letters in closer daze I'm hella feeling those just try not to cramp your letters in so much give it just a little bit more space zar what everyone else said remo it's good my style started out like that with time you'll be able to get them in closer and it'll have a really nice flow and lose that underline it makes the letter look like they're un proportioned and sideways when they arnt doker it looks like it says soker moce your letters in a bit more and give your k and r more of a curvy look and less of an edgy looks and push it in a bit closer pewl that's a hard name I'd think about changing it and it just dosn't look good don't connect your letters There I gave everyone crits.
New page bump. Utrip - Looks a bit too pointy to me, lots of lines shooting out. Remo - I like it, only thing I'd agree on is making the R a touch rounder. Sent - Looks okay, but pretty standard if you get me. PEEG tag
found a bible .....felt like destroying something View attachment 416567 View attachment 416568 View attachment 416569
I was at church camp anyways I drew a devil and I wrote god is fake in a bible Some faggot ratted me out and I got an hour fucking lecture and I had to go to some morning bible study bullshit every morning for the rest of the week
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